Bakuretsu Tenshi [Dreaming with Jo] v1

Only thing I'd really say is that the white around the characters is kinda inconsistent and a bit blotchy in places. I'm guessing you were going for a subtle glow effect, but it kinda comes off more as poor extraction.

i have that poster but i wish i had it the way you made it yours rockes

I <3 Bakuretsu Tenshi and this wallpapers looks very good nice bg Great job ^ _ ^

very nice job. i love the background you made and the characters were very well extracted. the tech-ish background really looks great. great job !!!

this is so cool! i don't know how u made the pic look like this and ican't even explain it becuz its so good!

Nice wall. The blur effect is really nice. And the colors blend together really well, too. Good job.

WOW love the techno effect in this one, super cool! :D

I love the BG on this wally! It's so nice and techy! The color is nice and goes well with the scan! But the thing I don't really like is that white around them, it really doesn't look good. I mean I know you wanted some kinda of glow effect like %trismugistus said. But the white brush you used doesn't look like a glow to me. But other than that, everything is fine. I'll add you to my fav's!

I love this wallie! AWESOME!

love it nice backround chosen blends well with characters and scence well chosen colours to blend one of my fravourites

Kewl XD

wowies nice. u did great keep it up

I have some constructive critcisms:

1. The trendy circles you have at the left bottom are kind of redundant, I don't know what are they doing there.

2. Like the first post has brought up, your render has the white line around. It's either a poor attempt at achieving the glowing effect or you just didn't extract it from a wallpaper completely. Get rid of it.

3. Some windows have choppiness at the pointy edge?

4. The actual background image is overly touched-up, I suggest less contrast and a little bit more light to show more details. Use some shiny grunge brush to achieve the dreamy effect if you need.

Here are the goodies:

1. Nice choices of colors, they really go along well with the render.

2. The theme is well executed.

3. Good choice of render.

barbaro

w00t, the render looks hawt! Really nice work, I hope you do more stuff.

I love this wallpaper, the characters are positioned perfectly because they contrast against the vibrant abstractness of the background colors which brings out the best of the image. The touches of white behind the characters is brilliant

I like it!

Cool XD I love this wallie very much ^_^

Thanks for this very good wallpaper

nicely done. i find it hard to find good Bakuretsu Tenshi art.

I like it as a picture, but I would probably get a head-ache if I would have it as a wallpaper. It's bit too restless for that.

Cheerio.

Jouni

i really like the layout :) it fits with this kind of series

Awesome wall- it's on my desktop now :D Colours are great and match good :3

I really like most things on this wallpaper, the touchups on the image, the text, the background layout, and the gold effects like those shown in the top left corner are the most notable as being very well done. The concept is really sold and I like it. My critiques are that I think you went a bit to far on some things. The image behind the text seems to have a bit to much contrast, not that the light wash is a bad idea, I just think it could be toned back some. The pinkish-gray fogish stuff coming from the left I think should be a lighter version of the goldish yellow on the other side, that way it would balance out the glow coming from Jo more and it would match the rest of the color scheme. Jo??s white light glow could also be pulled back some around the gun in her left hand. Also, that fine line of outer glow would probably be best taken out.

holy cow that's confusingly awesome.

This if the this best one. It has good quality, the bottom is more original and it is seen very well. The image expresses much. The children see themselves very pretty. Their wings are seen very well. This if it is the best one than and seen in this gallery of Bakutenshi Tenshi until right now. Good work. Congratulations. My qualification is: 9.0

ohhh this is a very good wall i love the colours on your bg

gahhh! jo and meg are just so cute >_< !

nice

I'm getting into Burst Angel and I like seeing these wallpapers. Helps me get into it more

This is so cool :)

Awesome looking wall, love the scan of Meg and Jo and I'm diggin the BG as well as the text. Nice job!

I like the style of the background and its colors. Good job with this wall.

awwwwwwwwwww so CUTE

your wallpaper is quite good!!! =] the backgoround is matched with the character!!! and also the outline cutted is great!!! the whole wallpaper is clear and attractive!!! you have done an excellent job!!! i like your wallpaper and hope to see your next wallpaper!!! XD

Awesome!

Love the blur effect....hurts the eye's a little, but still love it :)

I really like the background design. The thing about the white lines isn't really that bad. all in all, Good job!

The back to it is really nice and gives it a cool effect.

Really great looking wallpaper, the way the colors are used is great, I'm also a fan of warm colors. As well as the anime used, also all the converging lines and shapes give it a ver techno feel to it. Great wallpaper in general.

Imagenes eh imagens que devo de hacer para tener mas imagenes??

great wallpaper!!! the combination of color looks great!!!! Fits very well with the scan! Nice work!!!!

Well I have to say that this is a real cool wall Nice collars… only the orange clots are to mutts orange for me.

beautiful girls thanks

Another hot wallpaper featuring Jo and Meg from Bakuretsu Tenshi, or better known as Burst Angel. The background looks really good, and Jo and Meg look very good together. Peace!

Nice poses but a little clogged.

jOJO

i like your approach on this one. the BG is really really great

Very nice background, making this a very nice wall.

I don't know English and for this reason it is that I use a program to translate what I write and I read.
Very fast this work, for the quality nor it seems that it was only long 2 hours and I didn't find anything caused confusion actually is with a very good, modern look and half dark, didn't understand the idea of the smoke very well behind the characters, but nor I want to know because it was very legal rsrsrsrs.
Bad congratulations for the beautiful work

I LUV IT! It's so cool and I luv the awesome bg of it and all. It's smexy! :D Jo and Meg look cool with that bg I luv what you did O_O Good job! I like the name too.. Dreaming With Jo. Cool :D

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i like your wall.... the colors, the background an all... Perfect work, totally amazing!!

The color is nice and goes well with the scan! But the thing I don't really like is that white around them, it really doesn't look good. I mean I know you wanted some kinda of glow effect like %trismugistus said. But the white brush you used doesn't look like a glow to me. But other than that, everything is fine. I'll add you to my fav's! Thank's for your great work :) can't wait to see another one.

This is actually quite nice except Joe turned out blur...

(9+_+) i am really like this wallpaper. the color is nice.(^ 3^) the character is cool. (n_n)-bthe background is good. nice wallpaper.8)E P(T_T)good wallpaper. awesome wallpaper.(n_n)~ good job.( []-[])9 .(n_n).