Here's my first wall. The character has been re-drawn and the original background image has been manipluted quite a bit with additional elements and re-touching. Hope it cuts it.
Update: I have now changed the sky and made changes to the leaves (more transparent) and Serizawa's shadow =]




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7 years, 6 months ago
it so cute
^___________^
thanx
7 years, 6 months ago
The sky looks a bit weird though, but overall it looks nice! Although the background doesn't match the scan since she dresses like it's summer yet the background looks like it's the fall season : D
7 years, 6 months ago
Nice wall. I like the cool colours, but the perspective ruins things. She kinda looks like she's falling over
The sky and the mountains arent doing much for me, but I love the way you used the leaf brush on top of the tree... that's really fresh =]
Nice work on your first wall
7 years, 6 months ago
wall~bea~my pc want some new wallpaper~ good idea~nice col~
7 years, 6 months ago
Very nice work on the tree leaves and on the background in general, i don't like the brush used to outline the character, too hard imho.
7 years, 6 months ago
The character has been redrawn quite well, but I thought the sky looks a little funny....it doesn't really reflect the direction of the sunlight that is cast on the tree. Perhaps it might be better to blend the blue tones in together or make the tones lighter? Perhaps adding a little more shadow to the girl so that she can fit in more realistically into the picture.
But I like the color of the tree and how it complements the color of the girl's clothes. The fonts are also very appropriate and I like its color scheme with the brown-black color of the ground.
Your first wallpaper is very nice! Great job! =)
7 years, 6 months ago
Thanks for the feedback peoples.. much appreciated. To me, at first, i thought the sky looked quite different to what you normally see so thought i would leave it. However, it does make it look somewhat out of perspective.. something i gotta look out for in future walls '_^ ..and i might give a softer outline brush a try too.
btw the leaves on the tree was just pure coincidence as i was just playing around with trying a swirling effect, but that looked to busy for the setting =) ciao.
7 years, 6 months ago
oh great !! + + Kawaiiii~
7 years, 6 months ago
I love the wall, though the sky is kinda...off? I'm not too sure how else to explain.
Though I love the color of the tree - contrasts the girl quite well.
7 years, 6 months ago
Maybe the weather changed in one day, like it did where I am! I do agree the sky could of done better with maybe a brush, it looks cutout and doesn't fit the rest of the wall. But the tree is really done well and I like the grass as well. The girl was redrawn very well as well. Its a very nice concept and executed nicely, great job~
7 years, 6 months ago
this is really nice!! i like the background and the overall effect impressive!
7 years, 6 months ago
really good wall! the bg is very nice! great secan! keep it up!
7 years, 6 months ago
Hmm...everything looks good from the thumbnail. The scenery and scan are very colorful and pretty. However, at a closer look, the sky doesn't look natural and the leave brushes on the tree don't fit too well. The bottom half looks awesome, though, just need to fix up the tree and sky. Other than that, it looks nice :)
7 years, 6 months ago
WOW amazing!! I adore adore adore the sky blue highlights reflected on her hair- it's so great and artistic. just one complaint- the bright/flourescent blue maple leaves seem a bit too much- either take it out or do a bit less of them (like the small ones are fine) great quality wal!
7 years, 6 months ago
Good job for a first wallie... you put lots more effort into your first than I did into mine, I think =P The colors look nice in the thumb but in fullview... way, way too much use of that leaves brush, they look really unnatural and stick out an awful lot in this scenic wall. The clouds also could look fuller than they do now. Good call on the colors though, and pretty nice photo manip *^.^* Keep it up! XD
7 years, 6 months ago
simply yet smooth and beautiful, nice work~!
7 years, 6 months ago
yeah the sky looks great now!
7 years, 6 months ago
A cut girl, a nice background, some Text ...Good quality => GOOD WORK , OMEDETO !
7 years, 6 months ago
Whaouh, I think i never seen a so beautiful WP (maybe maybe) . A very cut girl and a nice background...Nothing to say but good work =)
7 years, 6 months ago
An awesome first wallpaper... i dont' think you need any thing done ...this is nearly perfect...very very beautiful...you have good taste ^ ^ !
7 years, 5 months ago
Lovely and cute work . . . thanks :D
7 years, 5 months ago
its so beautiful!!
7 years, 5 months ago
Nice wall!
7 years, 3 months ago
the tree made of maple leaf brushes is very amusing hehe
7 years, 3 months ago
i love it! this is simple but really amazing. cutting edge is what i can say. and i like the sky. its not weird. :) it actually looks very fitting on the overall background ur trying to portray.
6 years, 11 months ago
Oh how cute i love the vector its so nicely doone i think !!! the bg is pretty too, adn the leaves in the tree well... its looks like there is a bit to my on them, but it all looks good together!! THanks a lot for sharing this one here!! LuVE ~Anime11~
6 years, 10 months ago
Wow, looks really nice. I like how theres a little bit of black everywhere, in her clothing, the ground, the birds and even the tree. Your background is amazing too! xD
6 years, 10 months ago
I can`t see any serious mistakes... So well done!
6 years, 10 months ago
nyc pix
6 years, 10 months ago
*o*! i like it!! ^^ very nice
*o*!
6 years, 10 months ago
The background looz sUUuuuU great!! b ^__^ b
very calming....
6 years, 9 months ago
This looks great. =)
6 years, 9 months ago
[i]really great pic, she looks so cute in it,
6 years, 1 month ago
I like the background, aspecially tree sugoi. :)
5 years, 10 months ago
Can't believe I haven't seen this picture before, and I do like it a lot, specially because there are very few Natsuiro wallpapers in all the internets.
I liked how you retraced Kaho, making her fit more perfectly with the background, and the backgrounds is good too, very detailed, I even thought it was a real life photography.
Excellent job.
5 years, 7 months ago
What can I say?? Beautiful. Very very beautiful. I like it.
5 years, 5 months ago
Amazing wall, good job.
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5 years, 3 months ago
Good wallpaper ; very well made !
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5 years, 3 months ago
An excellent wall ; I love the colors !
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