i wanted to try to paint for real and this is what happened with my first experiment. xD;; it's weird to submit something so gloomy at the start of '09, but i just remembered that my new year's wall for '08 was "The Aftermath"... nonetheless, thank you everyone who has supported me during my time at AP.
i vectored a sketch yun koga drew while designing the characters for the series (so imo this can go under the official category). the rest was just make-it-up-as-i-go, pretty much no references used.
it has its sloppy points. what can i say. but it was fun. :'D so i want constructive criticism on how to improve my technique. be specific please. just telling me "it can be better" is too vague to help.
for the 100 Themes Project @ Instant Noodles #25: Tomorrow.
thank you dan and tsu for the feedback. :'] (i'm sorry dan. he's still wearing his "ballet" slippers lmao. it's a bit of a cultural thing, as i mentioned on msn.)
edit: tried to address most of the things shinn mentioned but that's only with the widescreen version.



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4 years, 4 months ago
I like the background.
4 years, 4 months ago
Wait doesnt this count as a doujusin then? O__O Anyways good wallie..but needs lots of improvement..LOL Setsuna's shoes look like women shoes >:D ahahahaha.But love the other details like the bullets and the smoke and the part of mecha :) Now for some critique since i forgot :P anyways the land looks good both in terrain and shadows but the thing i dont understand is how come the mecha's pieces are all organised on both sides of the cliff/mound/ridge etc.When a mecha gets blown its pices are supposed to be scattered not nicely organized in one corner (XD) LOL
4 years, 4 months ago
Wah, you're so on time XD I've been gone for whole day and I just came home, got to AP fast and see ur wall! X3
Too be honest, the're something bothering me with it, although I could precise it, maybe I'll try another time, I'm just tired >.< But character looks so much better than on that simple sketch, laso background is really nice. And color os sky makes me thing of some old painting. Good job :3
4 years, 4 months ago
Background is mostly fine and well done.
Maybe the only thing that needs some tweaking is the smoke trails and the small fires. All the smoke trails have the same color saturation, while they shouldn't since some of them are supposedly farther than others (remember even things like smoke need to show depth and are subject to color/saturation perspective!).
Same thing for the fire spots, except that since they're close to each other you may make them look the same, but still don't use such a bright and vivid red for them, since they're distant their color should look a little less saturated.Just a little though, because they still have to be noticed by the viewer, afterall.
The character's shading is the main issue, in my opinion. It feels like there's no shading at all, or if there is it's too subtle. To be precise, there's not enough contrast between the base colors and what are supposed to be both the dark-shaded areas and the bright ones around the chatacter's edge.
If you need some reference to study that kind of shading with the character giving the back to the source of light (in this case the sun), use THIS, THIS, THIS and THIS. If you need more reference let me know, I might have more useful stuff and I am sure there a lot of scans as well here at AP that could be used a good reference material for this purpose.
Last thing, while it's true that closer objects show more details, it's also true that the rifle that Setsuna is holding shouldn't display that many details since it's supposed to be almost uniformly shaded. Just like Setsuna, the side of the rifle that the viewer can see should appear darker and be only brighter around its border. You may of course still use different levels of shading to point out some of the details of the rifle, but you either make them look really subtle, or you make them contrast a lot (in terms of brightness). It's up to you to see which solution works best.
Anyway, this is just me nitpicking a very well made wallpaper (hoping my suggestions made any sense, heh), which is still absolutely worthy of praisal. Keep up the good work! :)
4 years, 4 months ago
wow all the painting is excellent. -the sky is well done i love it you really give the feeling of the sunset. -the ground looks soo real O.o it must have been difficult >< the amount of shadows and lights is perfect. -the sketch is amazing i saw the link and wow you really made a good work. absolutly well done (altough i dont like gundam i must admit this is excellent) good work
4 years, 4 months ago
I can't believe you made such an elaborate composition starting from that lacking-in-detail sketch. The background is wonderful. Glad you had the patience to paint all those burning buildings, they're a great asset of this wall.
+fav
4 years, 4 months ago
something weird but overall really quality stuff
4 years, 4 months ago
I left a kinda half-coherent comment on IN so there's no point in repeating anything. FANTASTIC.
4 years, 4 months ago
I love the idea! I'm not in love with the original sketch, but I do love what you did with. The background really works well and the titles was already a great mood setter for the message that was getting across. Amazing!
4 years, 4 months ago
New wall from you! =D I think you did a great job painting the background and i can see a nice improvement on the shading and lighting on Setsuna from your latest edits. But i still think some of the smoke in the back should be more faded. Especially the ones which are further away. Ouh and the smoke should be more faded when it's further away from the burning source. On the other hand, it should be thicker and darker when it's close to the fire. ;D That's pretty much it. Good work on the wallpaper overall anyway. ^_^
4 years, 4 months ago
I think It's an extremely creative wallpaper! I'm amazed that you've accomplished so much from that simple sketch. You've done a wonderful job in making the picture complete, I have nothing to critique when looking at your work, I only have compliments and admiration. The composition is astounding and it fits perfectly with Setsuna's past. The colors and the tone is beautiful, I admire your skills and creative mind. Thank you very much for this wallpaper!
4 years, 4 months ago
Lovely paint work. I'd have my criticisms but I know nothing about paint so all I can do is applaud you on how well you made this wall. The hues are a great selection for the choice you've made with the theme and background. I do enjoy the background smoke and the dusky skies. The emotion is there as well as the message. Great work~ .(n_n).
4 years, 4 months ago
Wow for a paint job this is one of the few that look really good! And nice job on the black-and-white to coloring job :D.
4 years, 4 months ago
аааааааааааааааааааааобмочил штаны!!!! кто-нибудь принесите мне мокрого полотенчика!! и не забудьте захватить новых брюки и трусы!!! ЗЫ: ушел прятаццо
4 years, 4 months ago
Kya, this is just great, all that detail from nothing at all O_O. And the painting is excellent, did you do that with a tablet, or only with your mouse? XD. It's awesome, maybe just little modifications should be made, as shinn said, on the smoke or something, but that really doesn't bother the eye that much :)), so it's really ok. Yay, Setsuna, i've wanted to make a wall with him as a child too, but you got me to it :D. Great wallie, favie.
4 years, 4 months ago
i'm pretty much new here, but this is pretty boss! i love the tones and the quotes. great job! :]
4 years, 4 months ago
For A Beautiful Future is a good topic!!great wallpaper..
4 years, 4 months ago
Setsuna is chibi that it's scary... such disturbing eyes. Besides that, loving the sky and the smoke. +fav
4 years, 4 months ago
Full viewed this, and I'm wowed >3 The ground he's standing on looks spectacular, and you did a great job painting everything. The fantastic background makes me forget the few minor errors in this wallpaper too ^^ Love it~
4 years, 4 months ago
This wall is just so beautiful it kills >___< I-am-in-awe! You did a wonderful job, really! From the gorgeous background that combines lovely with the lone figure.
Great light, great tone, great theme, great meaning, great colors.
But, well, since I dun watch Gundam I don't understand the japanese text on the wall. Is it the name of the anime in Jap? ^______^
Too lovely a wall for a single fav XD
4 years, 4 months ago
*gasps at uber background* Wow, you made this from that sketch and no reference!? +_+ Well, I'm sure it has been said many times, but wth, GREAT WORK!! Was going to say something about the smoke, but Shinn and Misao already write a lot about it. A bit addition, maybe you could give more color contrast between the clouds and the background sky. Maybe. My opinion is biased because the first time I look at your work, this pops in to my mind XD I'm not feeling right in the head right now *_@ I'll go straight to fave.
4 years, 4 months ago
:o Great background .. Good work !
4 years, 4 months ago
Hey, this is really a huge change from your usual style. I really like the painting. On top of that, it's MSG 00 :D
I really wish it could have been another character though, lol... like the grown up version of the meisters... can't stand having a kid on my desktop, LOL.
Great work though. Love it.
4 years, 4 months ago
See my comment on MT. I absolutely LOVE this! The vectoring/painting are awesome! Love the colors!
4 years, 4 months ago
wow a gun that detailed and real-ish theme for the background with no reference O.O i wish i can learn to do this someday O*O gundam 00 was drawn by koga? i couldn't tell **faves
4 years, 4 months ago
really cool
4 years, 4 months ago
I love the background and I wish I had gotten to see the original version. The only thing that irks me a bit is his legs.. They seem a bit feminine to me. Also, +fav! I LOVE the background of Setsuna and the brainwashing war, etc. Keep it up!
4 years, 4 months ago
oh wow, this is great lol :)
I am currently working on something similar (we seem to have similar ideas XD) and trying to paint the wasteland is...difficult. Again, your work has opened my eyes.
4 years, 4 months ago
Nice background!! great wall +fav
4 years, 4 months ago
Everyone admires the background, also me. Great job. Reminds me of two things. First to get a tablet and finally watch Gundam 00. +Fav
4 years, 4 months ago
Can't find words how beautiful this wallpaper is. The boy is so innocent and the background is so dark. It's (from my point of view) extraordinary nice ^_^ I like it very much and I think this will be my new wallpaper on my screen for a long time :) Thanks and I'm looking forward to your next wallpaper. I do wish you good luck :) It's a shame that I don't have drawing spirit and I can't comment this wallpaper so well but when I download wallpaper, it means that it's worth of my eyes. And when I decide to put it on my screen. I hope you got the idea how well is this wallpaper made. Gambare ^_^
4 years, 4 months ago
Mmm yes, what hasn't already been said? Nothing? Kay then:
+fav
4 years, 4 months ago
Amazing, incredible!
4 years, 4 months ago
It's features a great theme and I appreciate the meticulous details. It's very well-executed.
4 years, 4 months ago
Setchuna rules . . .
4 years, 4 months ago
First attempt? *hides currently wallpaper in progress, which is painting*
God, you're just amazing. I love the details and everything. I'm amazed that you have completed that little scan. Excellent job! <33
4 years, 4 months ago
just one word... AMAZING! the light, the painting, everything! great job!
4 years, 4 months ago
Lovely wallpaper!!! really nice, please keep it up!!
4 years, 4 months ago
love this wall kinda sepia to me but its really good!!
4 years, 4 months ago
This is a great wallpaper of Gundam 00. I like how you used the sun effects in the back and little Setsuna with his gun. I think this wall shows why Setsuna is who he is.
4 years, 4 months ago
this wall is amazing! colors are nice, brings out the character in the middle and then the smoking city in the background (took me a second to see that xD) the only suggestion i have is to move the text a little to the right, because right now, the "very hard to read" text it's kinda in the way and too close to the sun in the bg
other than that, very good! +fav
4 years, 4 months ago
I don't know how to truely express this in words, but i LOVE this!!!!! FAV IMMEDIATELY. setsuna is so cute here and the background is done very well. great job :D <3
4 years, 4 months ago
nice wall i like the theme of it i also like the background and the effect it has +fav
4 years, 4 months ago
Although i dont like setsuna i love this wall. i love the effects and painting :D well done and faves
4 years, 4 months ago
Out of all the smexy lovely Setsuna's you have to choose this one =o= Except for that great job! I see a lot of effort 83
4 years, 4 months ago
I trully enjoy painted wallpapers with pop out colors. So i am loving this one I'm surely, it's even in my desktop size! THANK YOU! :D
+fav
4 years, 4 months ago
Beautiful wall! The background looks amazing in all its detail and glory. The ground Setsuna stands on is so detailed in fact that you can the bullets he already used. The painting too is still very visible in some parts like the sky, but looks nice. +fav
4 years, 4 months ago
love the background the lone figure standing there is nice!
4 years, 4 months ago
Beautiful work there, my friend... Just beautiful. Although that doesn't look like Setsuna, but what caught my attention was the level of detail you put into the wall! Brilliant stuff!
4 years, 4 months ago
O__O the bg you painted looks gorgeous * O* I'm sorry i was too lazy to comment on it at dA xD *steals wall*
4 years, 4 months ago
very cool wallie... ultimately the background where village burned down....
4 years, 4 months ago
Wow amazing. The earth tones all look so nice together! The smoke trails are also awesome, and that gun is so detailed! It's amazing that you painted this.
4 years, 4 months ago
Very good wallie, I really like it :). The background is superb and the extraction is also very nice. Keep it up, I hope to see your other wallies soon :)
4 years, 4 months ago
good job sketching the stuff and patching everything up. looks really good the super alienated gun looks too high tech for him though haha xD
4 years, 3 months ago
yellow background not bad..
this website kinda lag
4 years, 3 months ago
Beautiful wallpaper ^^ Your work and the result is really very impressive
4 years, 3 months ago
I remember this from dA! Now ppl are going to take your drawing and slap it onto image boards across the web and it will be unofficial official art! Great job with the painting the ground looks awesome. :D lol ballet slippers.. Awesome job!
4 years, 3 months ago
Awesome wallpaper. What does it say in Japanese anyways?
4 years, 2 months ago
Survive of war.
4 years, 2 months ago
Nice wallpaper of Setsuna childhood day.fav.
4 years, 2 months ago
setsuna~~ a rather sad character~~ imagine if u grew up the way he grew up ~ man sucks to me him lol~!! anyways, thanks for this paper~!!
3 years, 10 months ago
nice painting i love the sunset style and the shadows are well done ^^ good work
3 years, 9 months ago
War in presence generates peace, and peace in presences generates war. It's sorrow circle for the human.
3 years, 6 months ago
I like this wallpaper and also the background. It is very nice.
3 years, 2 months ago
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1 year, 9 months ago
i pretty much remember setsuna holding up an AK-47