Heavenly Garden - Carnelian Wallpapers - Artists Wallpapers

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Author Comments

4 years, 2 months ago

Hi there everyone, here is wallpaper that I made. And I am not sure if this is good enough for AP. So I am only putting it up in here,

Also I need some critics with this wallpaper. I hope you can help me with it.

I used mostly brushes that I downloaded, and read some tutorials, to help me with the design of the wallpaper.

I hope you guys can help me :)

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*NekoiEchizen

4 years, 2 months ago

Lovely effects, it's very soft!:)

°GamerchiX

4 years, 2 months ago

This just looks like a jumbled up mess of brushes to me, I can't tell what you were going for really. Like is that a cloud shes sitting on or something, just looks like a big white smear to me, it needs more shape to it. And the colors are unappealing, you should have went with an even softer, lighter shade of blue and a soft pink. And useing stock photos for the butterflies would have probably turned out much better. As brushes alone really have no depth, they're one solid color, play around with the blending options and try using textures to make things pop. ^_^

~bluelion

4 years, 2 months ago

She is a lovely angel in the blue sky. Red leaves in the blue is drawing strong contrast in the wallpaper. Cloud with dim focus is very natural. Her smile is not only charming but also silent.

`FiiFO

4 years, 2 months ago

Nice effort for your first wall!!

~phobor

4 years, 2 months ago

cute !!!

~Mohammad

4 years, 2 months ago

This wallpaper looks well made. Nice job on making this wallpaper look efficiently.

~Litschi

4 years, 2 months ago

That scan is from Carnelian?? I always thought its from another Artist (do not know the name now) but its from an anime called Words Worth - and this isnt Carnelian!