Whew, finally this wall finished for the scenic competition.9(>_>) But, I think it's not finished as a perfect wall.(._.);
Well, it depends on you all. So, I need your comments.
Then, enjoy this wall.( []-[])9

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Whew, finally this wall finished for the scenic competition.9(>_>) But, I think it's not finished as a perfect wall.(._.);
Well, it depends on you all. So, I need your comments.
Then, enjoy this wall.( []-[])9
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4 years, 1 month ago
An interesting scene. :) As you said, there are some errors and blemishes. For one, her elbow shouldn't be resting on the keyboard like that. O_o The quality of the pictures on the walls vary differently in quality, and it is quite noticeable compared to the vectoring of everything else. And well some things look sharper or blurrier than other parts, so the perspective/depth seems confusing when full viewed. But very good attempt to bring all these elements together. It works, but is not as good as it could be. :)
Edit: you should have provided a link to the original scan:
4 years, 1 month ago
you did a great job on following the scan oh ya that hand is a little weird like nysha mentioned some parts could be fixed but overall it's pretty nice
4 years, 1 month ago
i agree with everyone , but i really appreciate your work (making this scan into vector) :) i also advice you to make the lines as a shapes not strokes , but i like how you made every line with it color ^^ also i think if you vectored the pictures on the wall and the map , it'll be much better . i'll favorite this for your hard work ;)
4 years, 1 month ago
ohh nice that someone walled this image... i really liked it when i saw the scan... :] as every1 said there are some things that you could fix... First of all... i think you should start trying to use shapes for doing the outlines instead of strokes.. cause the strokes make the image look more plain and too sharp.. mmm cant express myselft right in english for this xD .. also your strokes are too thick.. specially on the girl.. The pictures on the walls are too realistic to match the scene.. and the perspective on the desk is kinda off.. (i think you talk spanish because of the map? =P, cause i talk spanish too xD) anyways.. its a nice wallpaper... you used a lovely image =]
4 years, 1 month ago
its a nice wall and adding your own design to it. though some areas look out of place but overall great work on the vector!
4 years, 1 month ago
Everything I had to say already said...I agree with Nysha about the hand and the pictures on the wall... But,overall it's a nice wall^^
4 years, 1 month ago
nice^^ it's too bad that you add some real photo in the wall that are too many and also i agree with the elbow ^_^
4 years, 1 month ago
having seen the original scan this was vecored from, I have to say that the parts where you superimposed images into the scene stick out like a sore thumb.
Good job with the vector, but the execution of the pictures you added leave much to be desired.
4 years, 1 month ago
It will be what and splendid wall paper. Akarichan thinking about a past does not pile up
4 years, 1 month ago
awesome wallpaper<3... it must have taken you some time to finish this one... the small picture and whole room... painstakingly accurate... really well done.. love the way she is sitting and staring at the pictures or is it the computer... anyway.. great work..
4 years, 1 month ago
The wallpaper doesn't really flow together with the artwork contrasting with the "real" images. However, it's still fun to see and definitely a good idea :P
4 years, 1 month ago
On the whole, it's very nice. Akari has soft feeling and aria office created in the background is also a good idea. Good work!
4 years, 1 month ago
end, this wall is sooo close to being awesome. Just the minor details needed to be added and I am sure this would be a solid "A" wall. Like pins to hold the pictures on the board or the little indention on a book by the spine where it opens. All these little minor details will help your walls turn out much better, but this is still really awesome none the less. Your so close!!
4 years, 1 month ago
Overall, nice concept. I think your touches of realism are a very nice idea for the wall. The previous critiques are very insightful and if you wish to perfect your wall, they are good comments - however, your entire piece is still very pleasant to look at. Nice work~ ^^
4 years, 1 month ago
The detail is immaculate dont get me wrong, you put allot of hard work into this i can see and for that you are commended! try to use more "atmospheric" texturing on the photographs next time |(o_o) - G3rsh
4 years, 1 month ago
nice <3
4 years, 1 month ago
A particular scene... I don't know anything about Aria, but i like this "normal life" image...
4 years, 1 month ago
Don't mind me asking, but which Episode of ARIA is this scene taken from? I'm quite a big ARIA fan myself, and I've prided myself in having watched everything in it's entirity, so now that I don't remember seeing this scene anywhere, I'm HORRIFIED at the prospect of missing something! *Gasp*
4 years, 1 month ago
Don't mind me asking, but which Episode of ARIA is this scene taken from? I'm quite a big ARIA fan myself, and I've prided myself in having watched everything in it's entirity, so now that I don't remember seeing this scene anywhere, I'm HORRIFIED at the prospect of missing something! *Gasp*
4 years, 3 weeks ago
Aria! Is so adorable! Great Wall!
4 years, 2 weeks ago
Wow... This is amazing! I love how you incorporated past wallpapers, and created something that just feels perfect. I would be a fool not to put it as a favorite. Great work!
3 years, 11 months ago
I love that expression of Akari, is so cute.
3 years, 10 months ago
This very detailed background wallpaper, wallpaper in the girls are very beautiful, especially the wallpaper is showing the girl's side to make this wallpaper with the wallpaper the other did not show a positive feeling, the overall feel good, really is a good wallpaper .
3 years, 10 months ago
Full of life breath, mood letting a person is unable to very comfortable
3 years, 10 months ago
ARIA rules nice
3 years, 8 months ago
I love it! The wall is awsome because of it having other little anime drawings on the wall pined up! I think that is awsome.
Nice work hope you make more sometime P(T_T)
3 years, 8 months ago
I'm really amazed. You did a very detailed job ^___^b The idea of putting a map behind is great. But if I were you, I might want to put the plant in a smaller size under the big map.
3 years, 8 months ago
I'm just amazed too... I liked the map behind too, principally the points marked in red, showing the main touristic buildings...
Thanks!
3 years, 4 months ago
I agree with others... but i like this work. I love ARIA... this scene represent well my emotion when i see the end of ARIA. +fav
3 years, 2 months ago
Mature Akarii.. haha, finally I got the wall... you vectored it well... good job, but, I think it will be nicer if you didn't add real pics.. overall, nice wall ^^
2 years, 10 months ago
[center]Beautiful picture I loved it so beautiful is sooo cooool wallpaper
2 years, 10 months ago
[center]Beautiful picture I loved it so beautiful is sooo cooool wallpaper
2 years, 7 months ago
i love it~ thank you~
2 years, 6 months ago
Wow the frames and the map at the back caught my attention.
2 years, 5 months ago
Thank for share. ARIA, Akari, Alicia, (ToT)..