Clover first sunrise

Oh my, your new painting tehnique is awesome :D i just adore it nice background kit chan as well nicely done you two :D

the picture looks very clean~ very nice,I like it~8)E

Not a very big fan of this one. The fence lines are especially flat, and the clothing seems shaded in a weird way. Also, I know the hair strands are meant to improve detail, but they look fairly out of place with the style you're using. The arms also have a strange double outline thing going on that I'm not too sure about.

Nice smooth colors. :D The painting style is very nice. The mountains look good too. But I think the round green hills and the fence don't particularly fit in since they lack the detail/depth of the girl/mountains/etc.

For a one/five-day project, the results are nice :)

It's a bit on the simplistic side and there are some weird gradient fills here and there, but I think overall, this is a cute wall. The scan you chose is very nice and for a quick collab, the final product worked out to your benefit. Nice work ^^

awesome! 8)E

It is beautiful! P(T_T) <clean + sharp>

It is really smooth and clean. I don't like the gate though.. the blocks could use just a little bit of roughness and the gate doesnt really look like its attached (T_T) The background is really smooth and incredible though and the stock image really fits.

Beautiful! Are those wings?

Soft and dim colors in the wallpaper are very natural and sweet.

<3 love it!

its a really nice wall and great vector and colouring +fav

overall the vectoring + painting is really good but like nysha said about the details

hhm... of all the walls you've made vitaamin, this one is not to my liking. great job anyway.

I've read all of clover, so it's pretty hard for me to enjoy this wall since it travels so far away what clover really is. Clover is vastly known for it's intense use of negative space and whimsical details. neither of which this wall shows off. I understand that this image came from one of CLAMP's "mixed styles" drawings, but even so, it just...is so far off. I don't mean to bring up the idea of ot walling series you don't know, but I think it's wise to do some research first.

Onto the technical aspect of the wall...you've done some incredibly beautiful, well thought out walls, but this just is not one of them. As I was once told a long time ago when I used to engage in more collabs..."collabs allow you to learn from each other so you can strengthen your weaknesses" In this case, i think it brought out weaknesses more. The colors are nice...very soft, and definitely pull out "sunrise" and not "sunset". The technical aspect of the vector of Suu is pretty nice, but I agree that the white strands don't fit with the rest of the style you are doing. Also, the fence...the perspective is completely off. It seems like you started out doing it right, and then instead of taking the time to make each rung in the door have the proper perspective, you just duplicated them a bunch of times. It makes the whole thing seem very VERY flat as does the scale of everything. Some things are proportionate to her, like the wall, but then the door rungs are so close together they seem off. Also, back onto suu for the moment...her arm on the right looks dislocated. You don't have any lines describing which part of the arm is in front. I know that part of the scan was blocked out, but you need to know when to do those kinds of things.

I could keep going, but some of the others have already said what I wanted to. Just adding to their critique.

Ouch >.< It seems people these days are harsh o.O Anyways.. I really love ur painting style and landscapes but i agree that those hills don't really fit But still.. it's a lovely wall and I just love clamp so.. great job +fav

Lovely ! again ! You really should make a tutorial on this smooth vectoring technique! Cool background too. Very nice collab indeed.

The painting and the vector are really great :) i really do like the background but i think it's kind of empty! it's not that empty , but i feel you should add more things to the background , overall nice job~

Soft and clean colors in the wallpaper are very wonderful. They are harmonized with her face in shyness. Wings in her back make her fly to the sky and the future? Blending in the sky are really natural.

Very nice wallpaper, I see what they said about the theme of Clover, but you took an interesting twist in this image. I like how sweet, and almost happy she seems, an interesting shift in CLAMP's art style.

,,,,cute wall.... the design is clean, excelent vector

...great work ... (n_n)-b

congrats ! ='.'=

Beautiful wall! Especially the wings, I love them so!!! >___< The colors are also wonderful - nice and soft and cosy!!!

Great job! XDD

Finally I can comment ehrer too XD As I already said I really like it cause of the scene and so on even if I don't know what this series is about you don't have to know it>:D but really...this wings are really interesting.... can she even fly with it???

this wall is not bad at all, i'm so in love with the bg and the vector looks great, there are just a few flaws but that can be forgiven. All in all it's a beautiful work

I think the painting in this wall is really beautiful it may be simplistic but I think that adds to it's charm. I like the colors there very whimsical and lol the gate looks fine. I think maybe this could have used a bit more detail but what you did do here I think looks great. I think you played off each others talents well and maybe it isn't my favorite of your works but I still think it's beautiful. A- and a fav :3

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The scan is very beautiful, but the background I think it lacked flowers, vines or something.

You call a 5 day project huge? I envy you. So many people have been doing mountains and they're all upstaging me! XD But this wall is truly gorgeous. The art style of the vector and the flawlessness of it...the background is so simple but in the best possible way. My favourite part might be the colouring; the shades used in the sky and the subtle gold light on the girl. So serene.

You already Know that I love your Vector. ^^ Finaly you make a nice wall. ( How you said...Paint a gate is not your thing...) But I love the rest of the BG, specialy the sky.

Realy a nice color theme

so nice** love vector**

Love the colouring, it's so smooth and pretty.