Ga-Rei Temptation

Nice vector , though it's a bit sharp ( if you just blurred it a little bit , it won't be that sharp) . I love the background , and the broken window is awesome =D Good job~

definitely my fav work from u as i said before the castle top looks out of shape

like kuryuki said this is definitely one of your best walls. It looks like you put some time and effort in this one. Definitely a step in the right direction now there is no where else to go but up from here. +

Finally you used your dark outlines on a wall that blends with the walls atmosphere. Now i can still see some jagged edges around the edges of the vector, but there is a great improvement from your previous walls. You created a nice valid combination of features for the background too.... i particularly like the butterflies and the flower in her hair. Also, i like the was you added the shattered window in the foreground with a dark atmospheric background. Everything comes together so nicely here and you finally created a wall that stands out! And i forgot to mention.... i love that scan and the dark bluish theme is great.

Its so good to see you finally using a bit of effort with combining all the elements of walling. And finally i can safely say that this wallpaper is fav-worthy. Congrats and well done! Now lets keep this type of work up and see some more quality walls in the future!

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Nicely done background.

About the little castle or tower... whatever it is. The glass shouldn't really distort it that much unless the glass is like 1 inch thick. Since it's cracked like that, I imagine it's not thick and the tower should be changed to be the correct shape when you get the chance. :D

The thing that stands out the most for me are the brushes and the butterflies. They were done beautifully.

Good work. I remember seeing this on session zero and it definitely deserves being in the gallery now!

Great work, I really like what you did with it, keep it up.

Nice vector th finall version loooks too great since the last,.... revision... love it... and even its a big paper... love it!!! Nice work my friend...

Nice job Cilou-san! I love the BG and the butterflies! XD

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Hmm...I was thinking about watching Gai rei...After seeing that...I'll definitely watch it ^.^

nice wallpaper, i love it =3

Really nice, youre improving :D you have done very nice job, both on vector and background :D keep it up :D faves

A great work from you! I've seen only half Ga-rei, but now, after that, i want to see other half! I love the butterfly!

Your vector lines are still a bit jagged but they're not so bad, I guess. The flower in her hair is nice but it kind of looks like it's just standing there and not on her hair. I also agree about the edge of the castle - it should be less skewed.

On a second note, I really like the dark BG, the butterflies and the cracked window looks really nice, too. See? You're finally improving. All it takes is a bit more time and effort. Keep it up! :)

yeah Ga-rei gals are pure lovely^^ though the character vector too sharp compare with the bg (for me soften a bit^^) i like the bg esp the butterflies, nice touch,job well done +

You smoothed out her outlines that's good. A few outlines still look edgy like around her wrist, but overall turned out well (^ 3^)

Very nice wall. We need more Ga-Rei walls! The buterflies look great as well as the background scenery! I didn't like the window and the wall though, too cartoonish in my opinion. Yomi's vector is good too, but again, it has a bit of a cartoon look. Perhaps you could work in some textures and gradients to add complexity to the vectors. Anyway, it's a nice piece of work! Congrats and keep up the good work! ^_^

mamae

Yomi's just lovely, the butterflies fit her well

mm i really like the butterflies and the colors too..congrats!

she is looking soo beautiful in this wallpaper i like blue flower on her hair and the blue color butterfly really nice wallpaper fav for sure :D