Hello! That's the third revision of this wallpaper. I captured the character from the anime, and vectored it (10-11 hours, and butterflies in 1 hour). I added some details, I thought it was rather empty in first and second revision. First, I emphasized the contrast of the BG to increase the depth. I change the colour and texture of the wall behind the girl, I made a flower that I put in his hair, I drew/painted a tip of a kimono, with buterflies (that I drew too). Thanks for your advices in the Session Zero that really helped me to improve it! I hope you like it!
Cilou .(n_n).



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4 years, 1 week ago
Nice vector , though it's a bit sharp ( if you just blurred it a little bit , it won't be that sharp) . I love the background , and the broken window is awesome =D Good job~
4 years, 1 week ago
definitely my fav work from u as i said before the castle top looks out of shape
4 years, 1 week ago
like kuryuki said this is definitely one of your best walls. It looks like you put some time and effort in this one. Definitely a step in the right direction now there is no where else to go but up from here. +
4 years, 1 week ago
Finally you used your dark outlines on a wall that blends with the walls atmosphere. Now i can still see some jagged edges around the edges of the vector, but there is a great improvement from your previous walls. You created a nice valid combination of features for the background too.... i particularly like the butterflies and the flower in her hair. Also, i like the was you added the shattered window in the foreground with a dark atmospheric background. Everything comes together so nicely here and you finally created a wall that stands out! And i forgot to mention.... i love that scan and the dark bluish theme is great.
Its so good to see you finally using a bit of effort with combining all the elements of walling. And finally i can safely say that this wallpaper is fav-worthy. Congrats and well done! Now lets keep this type of work up and see some more quality walls in the future!
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4 years, 1 week ago
Nicely done background.
About the little castle or tower... whatever it is. The glass shouldn't really distort it that much unless the glass is like 1 inch thick. Since it's cracked like that, I imagine it's not thick and the tower should be changed to be the correct shape when you get the chance. :D
The thing that stands out the most for me are the brushes and the butterflies. They were done beautifully.
4 years, 1 week ago
Good work. I remember seeing this on session zero and it definitely deserves being in the gallery now!
4 years, 1 week ago
Great work, I really like what you did with it, keep it up.
4 years, 1 week ago
Nice vector th finall version loooks too great since the last,.... revision... love it... and even its a big paper... love it!!! Nice work my friend...
4 years, 1 week ago
Nice job Cilou-san! I love the BG and the butterflies! XD
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4 years, 1 week ago
Hmm...I was thinking about watching Gai rei...After seeing that...I'll definitely watch it ^.^
4 years, 1 week ago
nice wallpaper, i love it =3
4 years, 1 week ago
Really nice, youre improving :D you have done very nice job, both on vector and background :D keep it up :D faves
4 years, 1 week ago
A great work from you! I've seen only half Ga-rei, but now, after that, i want to see other half! I love the butterfly!
4 years, 1 week ago
Your vector lines are still a bit jagged but they're not so bad, I guess. The flower in her hair is nice but it kind of looks like it's just standing there and not on her hair. I also agree about the edge of the castle - it should be less skewed.
On a second note, I really like the dark BG, the butterflies and the cracked window looks really nice, too. See? You're finally improving. All it takes is a bit more time and effort. Keep it up! :)
4 years, 1 week ago
yeah Ga-rei gals are pure lovely^^ though the character vector too sharp compare with the bg (for me soften a bit^^) i like the bg esp the butterflies, nice touch,job well done +
3 years, 11 months ago
You smoothed out her outlines that's good. A few outlines still look edgy like around her wrist, but overall turned out well (^ 3^)
3 years, 10 months ago
Very nice wall. We need more Ga-Rei walls! The buterflies look great as well as the background scenery! I didn't like the window and the wall though, too cartoonish in my opinion. Yomi's vector is good too, but again, it has a bit of a cartoon look. Perhaps you could work in some textures and gradients to add complexity to the vectors. Anyway, it's a nice piece of work! Congrats and keep up the good work! ^_^
3 years, 8 months ago
mamae
3 years, 6 months ago
Yomi's just lovely, the butterflies fit her well
2 years, 9 months ago
mm i really like the butterflies and the colors too..congrats!
2 years, 1 month ago
she is looking soo beautiful in this wallpaper i like blue flower on her hair and the blue color butterfly really nice wallpaper fav for sure :D