Final Fantasy XIII Lightning

it's cool! i love the final fantasy outfits

all your elements are nice and clean, but your focal point idn't very strong. a couple things aer affecting this, one would be framing. the framing on this is a little too strong for the focal point you've chosen. another problem is that you have nothing that really leads the eye through the image. when the viewer looks at it, they see the big image first, and then the small, and all else is kind of dead.

i'm not sure what can be done to this, but in the future try to give people something to follow through the image.

do some study on focal points and framing, and overall composition will improve greatly.

I like this wall, it has a nice setup and lovely composition, but there are few things that could use improvement. The texture for the dark background for example is grainy as if it's been greatly enlarged from its original size or saved at low quality; there are also some jagged, white borders left over from the scan-extraction process especially around her hair, sheath, and sword edge. Use of repetition is a slippery slope in walling but you did a nice job here though I'd be interested in seeing this wall only using a different scan for the larger, black and white figure.

Regardless, I like this enough to give it a +fav

i like this wallpaper black background !

i like this wallpaper black background !

It's great wall indeed. You did a good job with it. I loved the way you made the BG!

Black and white in the wallpaper are drawing dramatic combination.

Great wallpaper! I love lightning (the character)!

I like what you did here - very stylish. The texture is a bit poor quality, but it doesn't really take away from the wallpaper as a whole. I'm interested in seeing what you come up with in the future, so keep it up!

Nice wall of Lightning here. I would say it's kinda unique, but the background looks a bit blurry and dusty. I don't know if the whites are part of the background, but it's kinda disturbing. Overall, it's a nice one. Keep up the good work!~

I'm not even looking for Final Fantasy XIII (I want FFvXIII) but this is a magnificent wallpaper! I really love this and my fiance (who IS looking forward to FFXIII) will definitely enjoy this!

The amount of time you spent on this is very evident because it is superb!

Very simple and cool, great work on this wall!

amazing colours and composition..lovely

like it. Cant wait for the game to come out

go to fav! *o*

nice work!

Good Job!

Oh my GOD O_o

NiCe NiCe NiCe Work. Great Paper xD

thanks

Great wallpaper 8)E Loved it! <3

Very cool wall

LIGHTNING! <33 Awesome Job! *____*

Can't wait for the game to come out in North America. Now, the wall.. it's appealing and the eye-candy factor. Just great.

another awesome ffxiii wall. keep up the good work.

Wow, i like this a lot! Quite simple but effective. Nice glow from Lightning in the middle^^

Great!!

One of the best Lightning Wallpapers I've seen yet, great work! +Fav!

it actually came out really cool. im just thinking that if you put something on top of the black background, it would look really cool. a little bit nd would've looked sweettt but this piece here looks awesome as it is. keep up the good work c-(n_n)

I like the double image of her, but I wish the bigger one was the colored one. It just sort of confuses my focus. Also, it feels like there's a lot of empty space to the left. That being said, I still like the idea and will still favorite it.

Nice, very nice. It's a pretty, but simple wallpaper. Although, that doesn't change the fact that I think it's very good. As for the background, I wish that there was more to it.

superb :D you did super good with the texture, blending and all :D

Superb editing. I'd love to give you a longer critique, but there is nothing to critisize here. Just wonderful work, thank your for sharing this wallpaper with us :)