sMILE XD - Sasahiro Wallpapers - Artists Wallpapers

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3 years, 6 months ago

wELL .. looking on gallery and found this great scan.. and even its soo simple.. i decide to make a wallie.. from this.. also asimple one... sooo.. think the oportunity of making a photo frame.. wall looks great.. with and open sky behind that sexy girl... jaja...sooo this is the final result... hope you ike it.. and every time you see a camera on you... remember SMILE!!!

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$divStar

3 years, 6 months ago

Hi there,

I try to leave a helpful comment. I don't think the background fits her, because a scene like this could never really appear. The sky is way different perspective than she is .. she hardly can "stand" on the sky. You could have added "raindrops" so that it would seem that the sky is reflected - then it would work out and make sense. Another thing is the poor cut-out. I don't want to sound rude, but the scan is cut out pretty bad. You didn't "cut" it, but just "masked" the background the scan originally had. Even though it's a pretty good idea (I've used this technique myself several times) you didn't take the time to do so properly. The worst thing about the foreground (the girl) is, that you heavily blurred certain regions - and this simply doesn't go with a photo-frame-wallpaper at all. If you'd make some "mix"-composition, where you add magic-rays and stuff like this - it'd probably work out. Also - the contrast between the bright sky and the edges of the scan (which are dark) ruins it in my opinion.

I'm sorry, but I just thought I'll let you know what I don't like about this wallpaper. Maybe you can improve the wallpaper? If you do so - let me know and I'll tell you again what I think about it (if you care).

Cya :). dS.

~DexLuther

5 months, 4 weeks ago

She could be looking down at someone that was about to take a picture of the sky.

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3 years, 6 months ago

Yeah I agree, also try to correct some mistakes...

~XlamlamlX

3 years, 6 months ago

sexy <3

~Gvnkwyr

3 years, 6 months ago

Nice idea, and a very good composition

Minor details, already mentioned, but are small flaws that really don't matter at all, unless you are a perfectionist. If you think in a second version, consider that your background can be the opposite: this picture appears to be taken from above (except for the boobies hanging in there, in fact your perspective is correct). But the scene just like it is is perfectly plausible (I'm on the grass with my camera pointing the sky and this sexy girls appears over me to say hello) Some parts of the scan seem blurry, specially her left elbow. However, that's not actually a problem, and the paper in general is lovely.

Congratulations!