Hi! This wall is for @yuukine! A while back, I had told yuukine that I would make a bishie wall to give her for Christmas. *glances at calendar* *clears throat* She's a busy girl, so she probably doesn't remember XD
About the wall...
Omg you wouldn't believe how much time I wasted on this. I spent HOURS drawing outfits for him, only to find that a plain wide-neck shirt feels the best on him == I was like, "ARARGH! What should he wear?! Should I leave him naked? SHOULD I JUST LEAVE HIM NAKED?!" And then I didn't know where I was going with the coloring so I spent forever on that too. And then when I had troubles with resizing... And now that he's finished, he looks really awkward ==
Sorry for submiting something so plain ><;; I promise I'll put in more effort on my next wall (if I ever get the chance to make another one...). I find that I've lost some motivation to do big projects, and I think it's because so many AP members that I had wanted recognition from are no longer active. Some day I will also be too busy with real life to make walls. In fact, I think that day is coming really soon, lolsob.
Thank you for stopping by!
There's not much to critique, but if you really want me to remove this wall because it's too simple, feel free to say so :)
Edit: Thanks for your comments! I had tried using textures and patterns, but I couldn't make it look good D8 Maybe I'll try again later, haha.
Edit 2: I tried, I really did! But nothing I do seems good TT_TT I can't find anything that suits his expression. If anyone has too much time on their hands and can add textures/patterns nicely, you can do it to my wall and I'll call it a collab, lol. The problem is I only used Paint.NET to make this and I already deleted all the files, ahaha!



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3 years, 3 months ago
Ooooh! Very nice bishie! *__* I even like the neutral colors too. The style is simple and bold, but perhaps a texture or pattern somewhere might help - like on his shirt or the wall?
3 years, 3 months ago
He really is a bishie! Great job on drawing him. Though you already pointed this out, the wall is plain. Adding some different colors to the shirt and the background would help.
Even so, you've done a great job with the character. Keep it up! .(n_n).
3 years, 3 months ago
oohh yummy nice bishie <3 simple but very nice and love the detail in his eyes *__* +
3 years, 3 months ago
I love it. Simple and clean. Great job. <3
3 years, 3 months ago
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA bishie <3 you know i do remember that, im bad at not remembering stuff like this XD anyway thanx a lot luna chan, this bishie is bishilicious ♥♥♥♥ thanx for drawing him for me ^^ hm maybe dots texture would fit what do you think? i guess ill experiment with him a little >:3 or maybe you could have made heard or something or with text or such XD in any case, he is wonderful, i love you girl <3 must desktop >:3 thanx <3
3 years, 3 months ago
Kya...bishies*snatches from yuukine* I love the neutral colors of this,totally great for desktop...I do agree with yuukine that some dot patterns or some lines and shapes,maybe some typography would make this a lot better,but still he looks super hot,and I think that was the real point of this wall >3 +fave
3 years, 3 months ago
I love bishie! Don't remove this wall! I like the simple style:3(and also the bishieXD)
3 years, 3 months ago
To be honest - I have seen better ones from you!
3 years, 3 months ago
as far as the character, very well drawn, good design, excellent work! As far as the wallpaper, well, much too plain for my taste, I would have preferred it more colorful, maybe with some sort of background, something besides a neutral colored headshot of one character.
3 years, 3 months ago
I LOVE YOUR BISHIES! ... and you color choice. Seems like he's a big guy.
3 years, 3 months ago
I think this is decent wallpaper, but can definitely be improved. I like the simple style, but I think it is too simple. The background can have some kind of gradient (like his hair) or have some kind of texture. However, I think the vector is nice, especially his eyes and hair.
3 years, 3 months ago
heehh, when did this come out... you are totally falling into the chubby cheek huge neck trap aren't you now? well who wouldn't after watching... jeremy...? that guy from soulmate? his position looks like he just came into my field of vision and he wants something from me by using his puffy face lol. so make a field of vision behind him.
3 years, 3 months ago
Hell I'll do it for you. liek, as a collab...
3 years, 3 months ago
Not at all so!
It's just another form of art, in actuality this type is called ALLESI where its very modern feeling with clean lines and simple contents, that you are unfamiliar with.
He is plain and simple, but has intense eyes. Some designs are unique and beautiful BECAUSE of their lack in contents.
3 years, 3 months ago
Way! For simplicity!!! I would definitely say that if he was real i wouldn't want him to stay away from me...XD Love the colors and the crisp of the wall.
3 years, 3 months ago
Well, Let me give this wallpaper my criticism though I know you said (There's not much to critique). But I think it really needs it. OK, let me start off with the art, It looks good despite the fact that his body is kind of huge compared with his face. I think your drawing is nice and the way you made the vector simple fits it nicely. However, I think it is called (wallpaper) not (scan) so where is the background part? You must have added at least a simple background knowing that this is wallpaper and maybe there are some people using it as a desktop. I wish if you had at least added only some simple touches in it. So, as my point of view, this would rather be considered as a scan more than simply wallpaper. And one more thing, the title is (jiiiii) I wonder what does that mean?
Well, all in all, you did a good work and hopefully to see more from you in the future.
3 years, 3 months ago
Why didn't you mention that you finished this? I was just about to ask you if you finished this lol. Anyways, onto the critique. You ready? You might want to hold on to something.
Ah who am I kidding. It looks great. I am with the others in saying that the bg does need some sort of pattern or texture though, something subtle. As for the bishie, no commento. But the color tones are exquisite, and you did a really good job on the vectoring. Even though it's not the 'original' work (y'know, what your sister would like), I'm sure that soul-piercing gaze will win everybody over xD
I've said too much. Sorry for being late, as I rarely check AP. +fav
3 years, 3 months ago
Woaa so much bishie all over the place! *falls over* This is what large monitors are meant for, so you can have bishies like this in high res staring at you :D +fav! I love his eyes xD WHY DIDNT YOU LEAVE HIM NAKED!?
2 years, 11 months ago
Holy wow. You know, I look something like this when Im wearing my long sleeve shirt...Just a tad more chubbier... I like =D