A wallpaper by ~melodyrhyme
Submitted 2 years, 11 months ago

Fullmetal Alchemist Keep your head up

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Keep your head up Fullmetal Alchemist Wallpaper

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~melodyrhyme

2 years, 11 months ago

 

Scans from the 'Theme of Fullmetal Alchemist' booklet, colored in photoshop. Just experimenting in photoshop, really. Listened to Sugarcult while making it, but couldn't get the text to look nice, so it's the title now.

edit one: edited to fix jagged-ness and re-center

textures/brushes:http://webtreats.mysitemyway.com/shankanator @ deviantartgraphicaffair.net

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θDias

2 years, 11 months ago

 

Extraction seems a bit imperfect. Jagged edges can be seen in various places along the outlines.

Lines inside the image is also a bit jagged (eg. Lin's clothes) possibly due to image source. I'd recommend using the pen tool to smooth out those parts.

There's a lot of empty space above the character, taking up half of the vertical height. Would be better to either:

  1. Increase the character image size; or
  2. Move the image up so that it is positioned somewhere in the middle (vertically), or close to the middle.

Design-wise, the background is satisfactory. No complaints here.

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°Mibelle

2 years, 11 months ago

 

There is alot of jaggedness around some of the edges. Also, I think that the grungy effect around them can be lessoned/toned down some. It's a bit distracting, for me atleast. Other than those issues its a nice wallpaper and it has a nice atmosphere to it.

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`Nysha

2 years, 11 months ago

 

Very nice! I like your grungy style and those pics of the characters, so nice choice! They are a bit jagged, but I have no problems with their placement, except they don't seem centered (they seem slightly off center towards the left side).

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`Horseradish Memento Mori

2 years, 11 months ago

 

Love the grungy-ness! I love the composition of every elements here! But the jaggedness is the only problem. Other than that, nice job. 8D

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`StormFangs

2 years, 11 months ago

 

Nuff much to say,the jaggyness is the only thing that is a flaw here...I like the placement of the characters and also the somewhat grunginess and the bg composition...good work,and keep it up! + fave

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~foshfuji

2 years, 11 months ago

 

omigosh!! it seems like everyone forgets about this couple!! GREAT WALLPAPER! I think the wallpaper seems a bit off-centered though. but other than that, it's amazing.

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`yuukine

2 years, 11 months ago

 

i love this, nice composition, i also love the colors and somewhat the way of its simplicity. and not to mention that those two are my favs, so fav :)+

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~yunonakozar

2 years, 10 months ago

 

good work

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~Roy626

2 years, 10 months ago

 

Nicely done.

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~Amon31

2 years, 5 months ago

 

Love the pastel colors in it ^^ nice job! +fav

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~Reyy

1 year, 10 months ago

 

o i love it!

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~Kurokun

1 year, 3 months ago

 

is very great :D the poses are very good

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