My second wallpaper on AP, I thought I'd do some experimenting with texts, it was quite fun. I genuinely hope this wall gets accepted, because my first one was not, and this one took me a bit of time to muster up, since I'm new to wallpaper designing!
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2 years, 10 months ago
The vector and wallpaper style is good, but it looks a little bad, to rough on the edges x.x
2 years, 10 months ago
Very nice. I love what you've done with the colors, and it's not to bad for a second wallpaper. (^_^) However, it is a little rough and slightly plain (in that there's not a whole lot of pizazz to it). But great job and keep it up! You'll improve with time, I'm sure.
2 years, 10 months ago
Wow, really nice. I'd been waiting for a wallpaper with Azusa, and it looks good. It's very simple typography, which sometimes looks lame but you pulled it off rather nicely. I do like the coloring as well on the guitar and with the ink/paint splats. Sweet job, keep it up.
2 years, 10 months ago
Very nice wallpaper, good composition, but the vector needs some SERIOUS work, jaggyness everywhere.
2 years, 10 months ago
I find this wallpaper very attractive from the thumb but I'm gonna comment on it.
I find the fonts kinda jagged and too sharp and some parts blurry especially the bangs on the forehead. The coloring balance is very nice though keep it up!
2 years, 10 months ago
In defence of the vectoring, I should point out that the actual vector was perfectly fine prior to all the filtering. Somehow the colour-swapping screwed up the edges. The actual vector is in the AP scans section right here
2 years, 10 months ago
Yep, the original scan was perfect. I tried anti aliasing the wall before I submitted it with no avail, there must be another way...I'll do so hunting around
2 years, 10 months ago
I like this one for colors. They match perfectly, but the only thing that my eyes don't like -- light blue text. It's blurred and it makes it hard to read. I also like this splashes on the left side. Keep up))
2 years, 10 months ago
colors are nice, character placement is good, but the text is not arranged very well. especially the name of the character over the other text. placing one text over the other is nor necessarily bad, but the way it's done here doesn't work.
take a look at this article for example on how to do, and not to do typography.
2 years, 10 months ago
thnx, wallpaper is beautiful and rox!^
2 years, 10 months ago
Nice work playing with the text. I think the gray background is kind of too dark, but it does contrast the other colors well.
2 years, 10 months ago
Grats on your first gallery submission. I'm glad you had fun doing this wall as I've noticed that most people doing this style have a really great time creating these things (and that's ultimately what matters in the end hehe). I look forward to seeing more from you :)
2 years, 8 months ago
Azuuu-nyan |(n_n)|
Too bad azusa in black and white, because I would still like to see the real colors of his guitar ^ ^ Otherwise I love it! Écouter Lire phonétiquement
2 years, 7 months ago
YOU ARE GOOD ABOUT HOW TO USE COLOUR TO BE BALANCED I LIKE THIS WALLPAPER BECAUSE I LIKE THE COLOUR IT HAVE ONLY 6 COLORS BUT YOU CAN MAKE A WONDERFUL AND COLORFUL WALLPAPER THANK for sharing very MUCH!! Keep UP the GOOD WORK AND MAKE IT BETTER AND BETTER TO BE THE BEST IN FUTURE AND TRY TO MAKE MORE AND MANY MANY WALLPAPER FOR US HAhahahahaha thank you!!
2 years, 4 months ago
the colors of the text need to change or the grey background must change, but in all, it is really good!
2 years, 3 months ago
I love this wallpaper of Azusa! Especially the simplistic look - it goes great with my minimalist-themed desktop. =)
2 years, 3 months ago
This wallpaper is AMAZING, especially for someone's second attempt! The colour choice looks good with the grey shades used, and I like the font choice as well. ^^
1 year, 8 months ago
COOL WALL!!!!!!! really nice work with the vector!!!!!!!!! and love the text!!!!!! GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!
1 year, 7 months ago
I like the idea about text up the pic, cool! But i think the "Because" and "Azusa Nakano" writing should be separated, because it kinda hard to read (sorry if it just my eyes, but that what i saw)
1 year, 7 months ago
I like the bright colors! Especially the Fender Mustang.