Pandora Hearts by Jun Mochizuki .
Program : Adobe Photoshop CS5Soundtrack : Leave out all the rest ~ _Linkin Park _ I spend two hours in it...because I couldn't decide what type of brushes to use, at least I didn't put any. D :
Is it boring ?

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Pandora Hearts by Jun Mochizuki .
Program : Adobe Photoshop CS5Soundtrack : Leave out all the rest ~ _Linkin Park _ I spend two hours in it...because I couldn't decide what type of brushes to use, at least I didn't put any. D :
Is it boring ?
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2 years, 10 months ago
Yes, it is kind of empty not boring. You did a nice extraction of the scan and I really like the diagonal lines blending in with the BG. I'm not so fond of the text/typography that you used. I love the checkered border beneath them. Maybe you could really use some brushes for this one. Like some circles or splatters----ETC. IDK. It's up to you. ^^v
2 years, 10 months ago
I'll admit that it does seem a bit bland. It's almost as if something is missing from it, but I can't figure out what that something is. I also think that changing the font would probably make it look a bit better. Like Horserdish said, if you use some brushes like circle or splatters, etc. , and maybe changed the font it would make this wallpaper look really nice. B)
2 years, 10 months ago
As everyone said, I do think it could use some livening up of the background. It just looks like it still needs something. I'm ok with the text though, I think it fits the look of the character.
2 years, 10 months ago
I agree too. It could have used a bit more...some cloud and a sun and some lighting would have been great. It's nice how it is but too simple. I also dont care for the checkered bar across the bottom either. Nice colors though and I love that song! It's one of my favorite Linkin Park songs. <3
2 years, 10 months ago
I think think the typo is too big,and I don't really like the lighter text over the darker...also,the text doesn't make any sense to the appointed pic...the bg totally needs more work,it's just too empty...
2 years, 5 months ago
i like the color combination, nice!!
1 year, 3 months ago
They looks like an Older brother playing with his younger brother