Version 2 of my entry for Round 9 of : 
The first one sucked pretty bad; you can still view it on the 120 war site.

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Version 2 of my entry for Round 9 of : 
The first one sucked pretty bad; you can still view it on the 120 war site.
Critiques welcome! Make a good critique of this wallpaper and we may highlight your comment and give you 50 bonus papers!
Stuck for comment ideas? pick some of these to critique: background, foreground, character choice, vector/extraction quality, color scheme, overall theme, typography!
2 years, 10 months ago
One of my fav entries from the round. I have a fable for blurred circles in the bg haha XD Hope to see you in round 10 :3
2 years, 10 months ago
Bokeh is always nice, although I'm not a huge fan of brown.
2 years, 10 months ago
Love the typo!
2 years, 10 months ago
I really liked it, especially becuase it's Mitsuru, HAHA. The only thing I didn't like about it was the light that ended up on her chin, because it was too heavy to be on the main image. But aside from that, it looks really nice.
2 years, 10 months ago
I love how you blended the text with the background. Great job +fav
2 years, 10 months ago
Like this wallie!! Nice work with typo and bg!! And all wallpaper is so 'styleled'!! fav!!
2 years, 10 months ago
I like it! The text and lighting go really well together I think. I might try this for my next wallpaper.
2 years, 10 months ago
awesome entry~
2 years, 10 months ago
I like the background very much! It matches the shading of the character nicely and makes her look like she's in some interesting lighting. The light by her chin distracts me though XD Cool wallpaper!
2 years, 9 months ago
your wall has good theme but it could have been better. i don't like the lightening under her chin. that kinda ruined it. but anyways...good effort keep it up!
2 years, 6 months ago
Tears of joy Mitsuru...Finally a great wallpaper of Mitsuru...sniff. Great job FNatt, Great job.
2 years, 5 months ago
Pretty good for a Mitsuru wallpaper, only thing that bothers me is the light ended up on her chin. Aside from that it looks really nice.
2 years, 4 months ago
Love.
2 years, 3 months ago
I really like that instead of sticking a signature down at the bottom that stuck out, you incorporated it into what was already there. I love the lighting. I might have moved the light on her neck to the left a little, so it wasn't directly on her, but meh. Still love.
1 year, 3 months ago
I do like the wall and the effects with the words but the ball of light on her chin drives me nuts, I think if it were just a bit lower it'd be ok, but obstructing her face seems a bit much. Otherwise I love the dark feeling of the wall.