A wallpaper by ~ayanechan
Submitted 8 years, 3 weeks ago

To Heart Another Unwritten Story

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Another Unwritten Story To Heart Wallpaper

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~ayanechan

8 years, 3 weeks ago

 

ahuh :X this is supposedly my b'day wallie that i made for myself *yes, i'm a very pitiful person >.>*

the mountains are flat (cause i don't know how to make them more 3D-like).. the sky looks plain (i tried a moon but it looked really bad).. the overall wallpaper is slightly textured if you looks carefully *_* so don't say it's pixelated u.u text is ugly (i know that but i'm not very creative, ya see)

i'm still really far away from creating average wallpapers but at least i'm trying right? :3

www.cynicalangel.tk

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°lclun

8 years, 3 weeks ago

 

Wow, nice one here. At lest you did something which I couldn't. Frankly, I like how the night look of it, I mean the environment. But, you should make some of the stars slightly brighter than the others. This will sure looks good. And the cat, it seems a but choppy. The edges of the cat. Try to fix it and the wall will sure looks more better.

Anyway, happy birthday to you :)

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θtrismugistus Wrapped in tasty pastry

8 years, 3 weeks ago

 

I think the mountains and the horizon line could be made to look more real simply by giving them a small gaussian blur. Also, try overlaying a dark gradient on the sea so that it fades to darkness further away - either that or put some reflections for the mountains on the sea.

The main problem, though is that railing. It's very flat. Try adding shadow and highlight to it to give it some realism. Try hunting for some stock photos of railings to work out how they could look better.

I'd loose the text altogether myself, tbh.

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°harakiri

8 years, 3 days ago

 

Hm, I saw the whole concept on another wall yet so for a copy it is not very good. In fact it is quite flat and it lacks dimension.

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*sandumirabela

7 years, 10 months ago

 

Nice wallie!I like it!Mostly I like and the water,the mountains seem a little bit too small better said the water seems to swallow them but with all that it is a nice wallpaper.

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~SpiRaLfLuX

7 years, 9 months ago

 

,i like how the typography is on the woood thing, yeh, pretty sad feeling. but the dog seems a bit weird..

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~spreadyourxwings

7 years, 9 months ago

 

thats so pretty! i love it. nice colors!

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~Kankitsurui

7 years, 9 months ago

 

pretty wallpaper! you did an excellent job! Kotone is such a cutie, too~ ^^

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~Freakzillah

7 years, 8 months ago

 

I really love the stars, the sky is so beatiful! The girls and the cat are also very cute, but the rest of the bg looks very computer-generated, not realistic...you know what I mean? ^_^

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~KG-Eclair

7 years, 7 months ago

 

Really pretty wallpaper^^ I especially like the effects of the sky for some reason. The atmosphere feels nice. Good work!

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~xeno

7 years, 7 months ago

 

Look lonely

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$megahappyman

7 years, 7 months ago

 

Doesn't she like cats or ? ^^

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~KyoKusanagi

7 years, 6 months ago

 

Wow, nice one here!!!Good work!

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~S4k3

7 years, 6 months ago

 

I'll agree with you that the text is kinda ugly but I like the rest of it. the background really emphasises the lonliness in the picture.

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~Sakurapt

7 years, 5 months ago

 

She is so lonlly but she is really cute too

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`anime11

7 years, 5 months ago

 

AHHHH, it's so cute and kind! i love the cat, his so charming

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~TheDarkEye

7 years, 5 months ago

 

Nice wallie :) Well done :inu:

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~aoyvr

7 years, 4 months ago

 

nice wall about a nice game, ty 4 sharing :)

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~kawaii-kari

7 years, 4 months ago

 

i like the colors so pretty!!

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~molders

7 years, 2 months ago

 

=D =D =D ecxelent... NO! ... PERFECT!!! ^_^

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~morcro

7 years, 2 months ago

 

So good.it is give me good feeling,really pretty wallpaper.cool good job! To favorites! ^^

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~Babyven

6 years, 6 months ago

 

Ru~

Haha...

Yeah!!! Keep on trying!!! You can do it!!!

Ru!!! She so kawaii!!!

Haha...

^ ^

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~Zoekin

6 years, 2 weeks ago

 

I like it! I like the background with the mountains. Reminds me of a piece of coastline not too far from my home! I like the way the water looks too! Very dark and mysterious! The starry sky looks great in the background. Good job with the lighting! Makes her hair look really neat! Cute cat too! He looks smug to me for some reason. Cute girl but she looks so lonely! Nice work! Favorite for your collection!

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~mei-is8

6 years, 1 week ago

 

this is a nice wall... the cat is too... i dunno what the word is but the cat needs to be fixed... but alll in all i love this.

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~POM-j

4 years, 8 months ago

 

Thank you for a good wallpaper.

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~welcometer

4 years, 2 months ago

 
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~Litschi

4 years, 1 month ago

 

WONDERFUL <3 GREAT! LOOVEELYY! The Cat is CUTE! <3

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~xCrossx666

3 years, 11 months ago

 

nice good work

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