To Heart Another Unwritten Story

Wow, nice one here. At lest you did something which I couldn't. Frankly, I like how the night look of it, I mean the environment. But, you should make some of the stars slightly brighter than the others. This will sure looks good. And the cat, it seems a but choppy. The edges of the cat. Try to fix it and the wall will sure looks more better.

Anyway, happy birthday to you :)

I think the mountains and the horizon line could be made to look more real simply by giving them a small gaussian blur. Also, try overlaying a dark gradient on the sea so that it fades to darkness further away - either that or put some reflections for the mountains on the sea.

The main problem, though is that railing. It's very flat. Try adding shadow and highlight to it to give it some realism. Try hunting for some stock photos of railings to work out how they could look better.

I'd loose the text altogether myself, tbh.

Hm, I saw the whole concept on another wall yet so for a copy it is not very good. In fact it is quite flat and it lacks dimension.

Nice wallie!I like it!Mostly I like and the water,the mountains seem a little bit too small better said the water seems to swallow them but with all that it is a nice wallpaper.

,i like how the typography is on the woood thing, yeh, pretty sad feeling. but the dog seems a bit weird..

thats so pretty! i love it. nice colors!

pretty wallpaper! you did an excellent job! Kotone is such a cutie, too~ ^^

I really love the stars, the sky is so beatiful! The girls and the cat are also very cute, but the rest of the bg looks very computer-generated, not realistic...you know what I mean? ^_^

Really pretty wallpaper^^ I especially like the effects of the sky for some reason. The atmosphere feels nice. Good work!

Look lonely

Doesn't she like cats or ? ^^

Wow, nice one here!!!Good work!

I'll agree with you that the text is kinda ugly but I like the rest of it. the background really emphasises the lonliness in the picture.

She is so lonlly but she is really cute too

AHHHH, it's so cute and kind! i love the cat, his so charming

Nice wallie :) Well done :inu:

nice wall about a nice game, ty 4 sharing :)

i like the colors so pretty!!

=D =D =D ecxelent... NO! ... PERFECT!!! ^_^

So good.it is give me good feeling,really pretty wallpaper.cool good job! To favorites! ^^

Ru~

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Yeah!!! Keep on trying!!! You can do it!!!

Ru!!! She so kawaii!!!

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I like it! I like the background with the mountains. Reminds me of a piece of coastline not too far from my home! I like the way the water looks too! Very dark and mysterious! The starry sky looks great in the background. Good job with the lighting! Makes her hair look really neat! Cute cat too! He looks smug to me for some reason. Cute girl but she looks so lonely! Nice work! Favorite for your collection!

this is a nice wall... the cat is too... i dunno what the word is but the cat needs to be fixed... but alll in all i love this.

Thank you for a good wallpaper.

WONDERFUL <3 GREAT! LOOVEELYY! The Cat is CUTE! <3

nice good work