Long time without a sumission. This one is my last vector; not that I plan not doing more, but the last in a long (and by that I mean long) time. I changed it a little from the scan, but still love the result (my painful wrist testifies for it). To end this, just gotta say I could not have done it without a tablet, but that's just me.
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2 years, 6 months ago
Can you link to the scan you used?
The vector looks good for the most part (the hair looks cool, and I think the stitches on the jacket are a nice touch), but there are a lot of color leaks on the birds, and I'm not sure what's up with that white glow around Hei. Not sure what the dark area right above Hei's head is about either.. Some lines are in focus on the birds that are meant to be out of focus (I'm also not sure birds would be that active at night) Now..I know you're really not going to like this, but the background really killed the effort you put into the vector. The starfield is a little dull; you could try adding more colors, or adding sparkle/star brushes for variety, or creating more contrast (I don't really like starry skies where there are literally thousands of stars like that, you'd never see that many at one time) That cityspace is blurry, low quality, and for some reason it's translucent, which allows you to see the stars through the whole thing. I think you'd have to vector the whole thing for it to blend well. Not trying to be harsh, just being honest. You could consider doing a more abstract background
2 years, 6 months ago
A very, very nice concept but some things could still be improved you know. Like, why are there doves flying when it's already nighttime? Not that I don't like them, I actually love the scene. LOL. Also, the cityscape behind him is a kinda blurry. And it doesn't match too well with the character. Maybe, a day time would have suited this wall better because of the doves and everything. ^^
2 years, 6 months ago
very nice vector i think also the idea about the Background but it doesnt mactch sicne the BG isnt vectored but still ncie work
2 years, 6 months ago
the buildings look like real .. exelent works ... knp pigeons in front of it looks a bit blur? whether intentional? whether you want to focus on his character's face ??... good job :)... thanks for you share this wallpaper