Description from minitokyo:
I tried to remake my old wall... and it still looks miserable >.>... Vectored Kyouko... I really didn't know what to do with the hair to be honest. I was trying to figure out how the heck to make it look less flat O.o'.... Since I tilted her, I had to remake her right arm. I thought of using the classroom, based off how it looked in the manga. My perspective... is probably pretty off >.>.... I painted random blobs and abused the smudge tool to make it look like those haunting flame looking spirits?... The little blocks of walls I relied on rectangles with gradients on them.
Original scanhttp://img225.imageshack.us/i/skipbeatv010c056010.jpg/
Classroom refhttp://img340.imageshack.us/i/skipbeatv010c056022.png/
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2 years, 6 months ago
Well, she really looks miserable... But it's a interesting paper, somehow.
2 years, 6 months ago
wow this is really interesting wall, love the vector. what i really love is the intense coloring between blue and white. gives out really ghostly atmosphere. well done+
2 years, 6 months ago
Im scared.
2 years, 6 months ago
++Friendly enough, the look of the character just plain miserable but need to give you credit on the flame effect that you had work on. It look nice but just that the color that you chose for you wall are totally out. Try to highlight the flame outline with blazing red color. It will add a boast to you wall effect. Additional than that, try to work on your vector and contrast to improve the wall. What you can do with the hair is that you can drawn a thin line to justify the hair line, surely it will look better. Remember do not make the wall look too crowded as it will ruin your wall. Removed some of the flame and maybe add some figure behind the character so that it could fill up the empty space. Some ghost figure will look nice though.
2 years, 6 months ago
The right arm is not in proportion with other one, I think it looks longer and the blue color seemed a bit vibrant, although the bg still has a dark feeling on it. Other than that, I'm not really skilled enough on vectoring so this wall still has a potential and the white bolts work fine too. keep up the good work :)
2 years, 6 months ago
That's amazing!! well done