Vectored the outlines and base colors and then painted the inside of both http://img59.imageshack.us/f/twgok6511rh.png/http://img696.imageshack.us/f/twgok7715rh.png/
It took a decently long time for the one with Diana sitting, while the other with her blushing didn't take too long.
I already had an idea of her being in her/Tenri's room thinking... Only issue is, it felt really empty xD. After thinking about it a while and looking at the chapters again, I recalled that Tenri liked to do magic tricks, so I decided to add stars, moon, and sun patterns. I made from scratch the sun and made it into a pattern. The stars I used a polgon tool to make it. At first the sun pattern looked really... really distracting. I looked at some room wallpapers and decided to add more to the pattern. So it ended up like how it is now. The stars hanging from the ceiling are supposed to be semi-glow in the dark types .... It turned out more amusing than I thought it would, I distorted most of the stars, because it looked unnatural for them to all face the same way so perfectly ._.'. I used gradients and bevel for the window. The outside is a simple scene of a huge moon behind Diana (unrealistic but I liked it that way xD), and some stars made by scattering dots around. I added satin on the sitting Diana, since the light is mostly coming from behind her.
Easiest part - Vectoring outlines? Hardest part - Diana's hair when she's sitting, it looked really weird when I first painted it. And the background... because I'm really bad at making them in the first place.
Revision two, made fixes/adjustments. Many thanks to PaoPorsche and Killermuppet!
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2 years, 4 months ago
Cute! n_n
This is very beautiful, I love hanging the stars are really cute ... And I love your work with the picture below, pretty colors and details of light and shade are great ... Very good thanks!
2 years, 4 months ago
Great effort on your part, darkheartknight!
I noticed the difficulties you had in the background as well as painting your character. I'd like to commend your work on the vector, especially the hair. I sure would like to paint hair like that.
Now, if you don't mind, I'd like to point some technical aspects that you could improve on to make this and your future walls look better. First, the way you painted the entire wall makes it look like the Tenri sitting down is a painting, since the shadow from the Tenri on the foreground/close up is casting on the background in a way that it looks like the background is flat. Second, the Tenri sitting down is painted well, but the way she compliments her surroundings still needs improvement. She appears floating on the bed and the bed appears about 2 feet wide. Third, the lighting should be left on the back of Tenri sitting down, it appears her legs have lighting as well (notice the highlights on the side).
Well, it's great effort. Technical issues can be tricky at times but should not be overlooked so that you can produce great looking walls, which your previous one was.
I hope I wasn't harsh on my critique, please feel free to let me know what you feel if I was.
Thanks, and continue walling!
2 years, 4 months ago
Thank you very much for the critic! =) It wasn't harsh at all, and it was really helpful and detailed~ I tried to fix most of what you mentioned, the width of the bed and shadows. Thank you again!
2 years, 4 months ago
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I have to say your wall's are pretty impressive. Though Like °PaoPorsche said there is some things that should/need to be fixed. The main one would be the bed.. It really does look like it 2 foot wide...and really long. To be honest it looks like you've tried to get the whole image on the bed in the space thats between the larger image at the right.. Also your bed doesn't seem to have defined edges even if they are curves
I like how you've got the strings in for the hanging stars.. there noticable but not to noticable.
Also your window frame looks...strange. Its shadowed inwards at the top and the outwards at the bottom.
But it's still really good :3
2 years, 4 months ago
Thank you for the critic! ^.^ I tried to fix the bed by increasing its width. About the edges, I increased the opacity and made the color a bit bolder, is that what you meant? I attempted to fix the window frame.... but it still looks weird.
Thanks a lot =)
2 years, 4 months ago
First I have to say that you have much potential, it seems that you make your own vectors of the characters and try to do the backgrounds, I like the Diana's vector/painting(I was impresed by the Nanasaky vector) .
I would prefer that you only use the sitting Diana vector for this wall and use the second of her face for another wall, so you had all that space to improve the feeeling of the scene. Another thing is that she is in front of the moon and her halo mix with it, it's some confusing. Just my two cents and keep working!!
2 years, 4 months ago
Very nice and delicate wall
1 year, 10 months ago
good jod... ur work i impresivve indeed