A wallpaper by ~Mylork
Submitted 2 years, 4 months ago

Fullmetal Alchemist Pretty, if the sun won't shine

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Pretty, if the sun won't shine Fullmetal Alchemist Wallpaper
  • Revision 1

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  • Revision 2

    • 2/222736

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~Mylork

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Well, after looking well, i had not done a good job =/

I decided to improve a little the wall! Cleaned up the scan and the background and made some changes in the wording (position, color and effects). I think i improved a lot :D

Sorry, this version only on Widescreen.

Thanks to user insomnight, which supplied the scan here on the site.

Hope you enjoy the new work, comment please! :)

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°wasgoed

2 years, 4 months ago

 

beautiful background, to bad the scan doesn't suite it. Her blond hair and her coat just don't match it's colours of the background, so you won't get the "whole" effect if you know what I mean. It's not integrated.. also, the coat in general isn't pretty, she, as a girl is suppose to and the background supports that idea. Not that it's your fault or something, I just think it would be much beter with an different scan/vector! Scan isn't made of much quality either.. you can see the scan lines still..

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`Tens

2 years, 4 months ago

 

The wall sort of feels like a huge sig lol.

At the very least, you should have vectored the character. She would appear more sharp and compliment the background a bit better. The font shadows and ghosting don't look very good. I think it would have been better to just give them all flat. The half tones would look better if they started off smaller.

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~stepkrip

1 year, 11 months ago

 

Very nice!)