Merry Nightmare

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↺Kamlotton

2 years, 2 months ago

Allright, so this is my second vector! Took all advices given with 1st vector to hearth and here is the result!

Worked on this screenshot:

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/3448/merry2screenshot.png

EDIT: due to high demand, added marks on her cheeks despite their lack in source (which was propably just lame error)

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^nat

2 years, 3 months ago

Great work! Your outlines are much more flattering in this vector, and even your source image is a better choice allowing for more detail. Nice recreation on her coat too, looks seamless ^^

~chimulu

2 years, 3 months ago

i like this style yeah~~~

°haruhis2kyon

2 years, 3 months ago

One thing I love about Merry is that she has so many awesome facial expressions! :D

`akiranyo Astraea

2 years, 3 months ago

Merry is one of my favorites in the new season of animes. Also happy with the fact that somebody tries to vector it from screenshots. Definitely improved from the first, the outlines are a way better and it has more contrast. My concern would be in the fact that she is cropped. The usability in wallpapers drops seriously with that, cause the artist needs to place her too much on the left, and good walls should be centerized. If you know the character, doesn't takes too much to rebuild missing parts.

~saiberia

2 years, 3 months ago

i like this girl

↺Kamlotton kuronoshika.blogspot.com

2 years, 3 months ago

Huh, funny thing, I just noticed that even in source screenshot, she's missing her blue triangles o.0

@akiranyo I realize that it'd be way better if I rebuilded left side as well, but I just had no idea how should it look. Right side wasn't so hard with so many other screenshors floating arround, feets were hell xD if anyone was to sketch me a decent left side I could add it to vector but for now I alone am unable to do this much :/ it's the perspective of that part that is weird or something...

I will also still use some tips for future improovements ^^ You guys helped me a lot already, hope my next vector will be even better (yeah, planning on next merry vector for now, web lack them too much!)

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$donicila

2 years, 3 months ago

Nice vector! I really love Merry!! Thank you for sharing!

~deadbeam

2 years, 2 months ago

Yumekui Merry!!! love it

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^Vampluva Future type Person

2 years, 3 months ago

Nice vector Kam!

I like the colours, and she's such a cute character.

The only thing I would change is the bright streak in her hair, it's a little too straight for my tastes. I would have curved it a little more, but that's me.

Overall I think you did a great job!