hmmm, this is the first wallpaper i have submitted to AP...o_o..actually i am really happy on how the clouds came out and the bg..^^...i thought blurring the birds would make it look okay..and the outcome of it i think it is okay..XD...hmm i change the resolution of this wall to 1600X1200 for people who has an larger monitor..^^...so i hope it wont cause any problems..=P.so heres my frist wall i submitted...enjoy!!..
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7 years, 3 months ago
Since this is ur first wallpaper, this is my first comment to u
EXCELLENT WORK :) Great vectoring by the way :)
7 years, 3 months ago
WOW! the BG is so nice!
7 years, 3 months ago
Everything in your wall is so pretty except for the text area =[
It's a really great wall too. I'd seriously consider spending a little more time on that top left corner. To start with, I think you need to lose the drop shadow effect... it makes the image 'bellow' the text look flat.
Besides that top left corner though I really like it. The colours are nice and warm, and the saber fits in with the background well.
7 years, 3 months ago
I do not want to seem harsh, but what have you done beside flipping the scan over and adding default bird brushes, text "fate stay night" on it? I seriously do not see much difference.
7 years, 3 months ago
Perhaps a little too simple, but it's ok since it's your first one :)
The lighting matches very well.
7 years, 3 months ago
nice wallie, the background look really nice with beautifull colour that really fit the wallie, the effects also look very good, especially the lighting of this wallie, the scan also look very nice, it's really clean and smooth, the only think that I think doesn't look good in this wallie is the text, the text doesn't match with the wallie at all, but still the wallie is really looking good. Great job and thank you for sharing
7 years, 3 months ago
Pretty kawaii. Nice BG + i like the character, from the scan. I kinda feel a bit excited too, cause im in the middle of my first one. +FAV is for shure.
7 years, 3 months ago
yesha another picture of saber my beloved favorite character of all time this one totally beat nagi surichiro by far and he was my old fav <3
I WUUUUUBBB Saber and fate stay night and this wallpaper makes her look sweet and sexy as heck i love this wall gj gj times infinity !
+fav because i love this wall dUH!
7 years, 3 months ago
7 years, 3 months ago
I really like this wall, the girl is kawaiii ^^ And I like the colors of the BG a lote !!
7 years, 3 months ago
In my opinion, the birds are okay, they do match in with the overall scene. I do have a little problem with the text though. It looks like it was just placed above the image. The drop shadow you used really emphises this point. Although you did do something a little creative with the placement of the text, the font itself adds little to the overall composure of the piece. The slash character's colouring is too close to the background colour in my opinion, it's only definition is the drop shadow. Sorry.
7 years, 3 months ago
im going to have to go with omnidevil here... even though it is your first wallpaper, it doesnt seem like you did much, i would suggest maybe having done more to change the saturation of the wallpaper, maybe add some more detail to the backround, and things of that sort, as for the text, the drop shadow doesnt go well on that type of bacround being that when you put a drop shadow there it conflicts with the angle of the wallpaper.
7 years, 3 months ago
^____________^ I love the background!!! It's so pretty and serene!!
7 years, 3 months ago
she looks so adorable
7 years, 3 months ago
I like this wallpaper al lot. Her smile and the sunset, it's just beautiful.
The thing is, I think you really did yourself a disservice when you made those changes to up the size. It is nice to have that larger expanse of sky, it's true. The layout, from a purely graphics design standpoint, was improved. But the editing you used to get it there is just too obvious. Those three clouds under the title especially, look like cut and pastes. The other three clouds in the bottom left also still look a little like clones, and the cloud transition above her head looks like it was done with just a little bit of smudge tool. It would also be a good improvement to give more attention to the text, right now it's just a drop-shadow.
I'd say either going down to a smaller size or spending a good deal more time on the background would be called for.
Anyway, overall, I still like it quite a lot.
7 years, 3 months ago
Nice scan,nice effects,you made your wall a sunset scene? Good wall ,keep it up
7 years, 3 months ago
indeed it is simple but taking Omni's comment, you could have done better than this. but still, rather impressive anyways. in the simplest ways of it.
7 years, 2 months ago
Oh!! Saber & very beautiful smile.. I Love It
7 years, 2 months ago
The text isn't really nice and it doesn't fit the wallie.
The background is filled with warm colors that gives this wallpaper a nice impression. The colors really goes well with Saber because she's a blondie. Good job in cleaning the scan by the way. The wallpaper is good all in all.
7 years, 2 months ago
Nice wall.This wall for person completely relaxed feeling, displays character's beauty. anyway,nice work. to fav
7 years, 2 months ago
Nice! Both the sky and saber in this wallpaper are very beautiful.
Great job!
7 years, 1 month ago
I love Saber's smile. :D
7 years, 1 month ago
Really nice background! I love Saber...Totally a favourite! Good job! Keep it up!
7 years, 2 weeks ago
wow...excelent job!
7 years, 3 days ago
It's very simple... But hey, it's better than what I could ever imagine to do, so...
6 years, 11 months ago
Wow! The bg has a color/colour of a sunset. And i like sunsets. Well done^^+FAV
6 years, 11 months ago
Not bad, I like the expression of Saber, looks mature, I think
Nice work, pal.
6 years, 9 months ago
She pretty in that pic.
6 years, 9 months ago
Nicely made background.I like the cloud you made,its one of the best .And Sabers also look cute in this wallie,nice choice....
6 years, 8 months ago
nicely done making the wallpaper saber looks so peacefull and whit the lights its perfect ^^
6 years, 7 months ago
I think that the effect of the background is indeed wonderful. Yellow and orange favor the smile that Saber is warm more and more. I think purple for the balance of the entire color to be straightened with arrangement of color not only the warm color but also right. I think that it has finished a very good work.
6 years, 6 months ago
SHES HAPPY! so CUTE hahaha i love saber awesome job
6 years, 5 months ago
cute. it makes me calm. How about trying to make a night sky? Would fit even better
6 years, 4 months ago
Nice background. Very serene and beautiful, but the words mess up the whole feel. If needed, it'd be better in the corner or somewhere where it wouldn't be in the way of the picture. Nice colors, since you built upon the original scan, so it really made my eyes pop. Very nice!
6 years, 4 months ago
that's good job. i like it. thanks for sharing.
6 years, 4 months ago
simple. but pretty work
6 years, 2 months ago
This is a very nice wallpaper. I like the background. Great work. :)
5 years, 11 months ago
Good job on this wallpaper, it's really pretty and would be perfect for my desktop. Continue to do wallpapers like this one. ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _
5 years, 11 months ago
well since this is ur first paper..i muz say its nicely done..the birds are pretty ok..but the look on sabers face looks so peaceful..>.<
5 years, 9 months ago
Awwww beautiful!
Though Saber's eye color is a bit off neh?
I love those clouds! I want to make clouds like that but i never can *grrr*
5 years, 8 months ago
aww.. Saber GREAT, Saber in Casual Dress BETTER, Saber's Smile? PRICELESS~ ^^ Thx for posting this up.. i simply LOVE Saber in the casual dress!
5 years, 7 months ago
well done. Really nice wall. ^^
5 years, 4 months ago
Good job! You rock for sure. I'm wondering how long it took you to make it.... For the way, Saber in Fate/Stay Night series is my favourite character. Thank you very much!
5 years, 2 months ago
Good wall ; good job !
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4 years, 10 months ago
Saber was awesome
good job