A wallpaper by `Cilou
Submitted 2 years, 2 months ago

ALPHONSE Respite

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Revision 2 more stunning XD - ~meow0209
Respite ALPHONSE Wallpaper
  • Revision 1

    • 1/205755
  • Revision 2

    • 2/205964

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Avatar for Cilou
`Cilou

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Hi! Thanks to nat for this awesome scan (found on MT, I'm surprise not to find it in AP!)

http://static.minitokyo.net/view/40/21/521090.jpg

That's a new way to vector for me (one test, so please be indulgent!) and I spent a long time to make it! I vectored the Cathedral balustrade and painted a sky with lightning effect.

Lot of walls of this manga is really dark, so I had the idea to make something gloomy but with light, like hope... I don't know the story of Black Rock Shooter, so I hope I didn't make a mistake and that this wall fits the anime!

I hope you'll like it!

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Avatar for Aladdin
`Aladdin 古いを尊重

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Hah!!! I never thought that you will wall BRS!!! Cool wallpaper ^^ The background need maybe more details and shapes but still a nice attempt ^^ +FAV

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~xzero

2 years, 2 months ago

 

both versions are excellent, but i'll take the rev 2 ^^, faved

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°Stereoman

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Awesome! I prefer version 2! +fav

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~heavenlyjeanne

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Really love the colors. Beautiful wall.

+fav

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~pesto81

2 years, 2 months ago

 

The birds were a great addition. Really fits the feeling of this wall.

Avatar for proxima
$proxima

2 years, 2 months ago

 

I definitely think that version 2 is the winner. That raven is the pièce de résistance. That's the touch that make me want this one. A gothic grey scene with a complementary mascot, as its exclamation point.

I think the lines of the foreground building are a bit too sharp in places; the perspective seems to be lost, but that said I really like this wall.

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~kristen00

4 months, 2 days ago

 

shippuden

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~Spincast

2 years, 2 months ago

 

rev2 here xD, great wall

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`Tens

2 years, 2 months ago

 

You can't "find" it on AP because it's listed under the artist's category.

The original artist is ALPHONSE who is a great artist. One of my favorites out there because of his/her smooth painting, ideas, and concepts.

For the most part your vector is good. It's simple but uses gradients to unflatten it. My main problem is the hair. The middle of her left pig tail should have a shine on it like the original scan. It makes that area less plain. Then the left pigtail could use some gradients. I like the architecture but it needs more to it. Maybe some light texture and the design like those 3 leaf clover holes. It needs to be more symmetrical and have a cleaner shape. The architecture's linework looks thick/stroked. It makes the character seem out of place.

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°ashuraeffect

2 years, 2 months ago

 

yess finally a dark gothic wall XD

what tens said maybe right but I'm not that good of an art critique and it looks good in my eye anyway so +fav XD

Avatar for Horseradish
`Horseradish Memento Mori

2 years, 2 months ago

 

I must say, your take on the lineless art is very nice. :D When in the thumb mode, the colors look really smooth but when I full view it, there are some sharp edges of the colors there. But this is really, really nice. I'd say that her eye needs a bit more glow in it. ^^v The lighting's just right and the atmosphere really fits the whole mood of this wall. :D But the crow/raven beside her is kinda large, don't you think? :O

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~pedxingx

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Nice editing of the scan. The building and backdrop feels empty and static. The roof has no real texture of material, just line segments sectioning off pieces. The lighting in the backdrop feels like its its just far away and I don't get a good sense of lighting up front.

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`Nysha

2 years, 2 months ago

 

^Ravens are very large birds - about the size of hawks. The size is fine. (However there is something very wrong about its feet) The lineless approach is good on the girl, but you should have done it for the buildings too. Those lines on them are super jagged and wonky, and the clover leaf shapes aren't clean (they're warped and lopsided). If you spent as much effort on the bg as you did on the girl, the wall would be more impressive. You should probably also upload the girl as a vector too, like you did for some of your other ones. :)

Avatar for bluelion
~bluelion

2 years, 2 months ago

 

In the gloomy darkness, her eyes are shinning with her evil spirit. They are searching and her sword will destroy.

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$KASTER

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Good.....nice get! XD

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$TaylorGS

2 years, 2 months ago

 

It's amazing how much the lighting effect and buildings in revision two added to the wallpaper! The ravens are a nice touch as well. ^^

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`Killermuppet

2 years, 2 months ago

 

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WHOA!! YOU WALLED BLACK ROCK SHOOTER!!

very nice use of the scan Though your bg looks incredibly flat D: I love how you've vectored her though, her skin the most.

Avatar for Neo89
~Neo89

2 years, 2 months ago

 

taking rev 2... superb job btw :)

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~Valac

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Amazing!!!!!! THanks for this awesome wall!!!

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~XTR3m

2 years, 2 months ago

 

merci thanks Arigato :D

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~xXEvilAngelXx

2 years, 2 months ago

 

thnks .. this web is awesome!!!

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~xXEvilAngelXx

2 years, 2 months ago

 

arigato for the picture

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~krikida

2 years, 2 months ago

 

awesome wall.. keep it up! cheers! \m/

Avatar for TheDoorLeadingNoWhere
~TheDoorLeadingNoWhere

2 years, 2 months ago

 

i would prefer some texture and a wee bit more contrast, but this is still awesome never the less. nice job

Avatar for Tsukimiya
~Tsukimiya

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Beautiful wallpaper! The background is cool! Thanks for sharing!

Avatar for Vampluva
^Vampluva Future type Person

2 years, 2 months ago

 

WoW =D

Another Instant Fave from me Cilou.

What more can I say other than I love your style. Your last few walls have blown me away, and this one is no different! Love the atmosphere you've created with this one!

Avatar for Vampluva
^Vampluva Future type Person

2 years, 2 months ago

 

A Quick note - Revision 2 All The Way!! <3

Avatar for meow0209
~meow0209

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Really nice composition. The girl looks so COOL

Avatar for Goodz
~Goodz

2 years, 2 months ago

 

thanks xD nice wall

Avatar for Himitsukou
`Himitsukou

2 years, 2 months ago

 

The background is looking good, that terrace and sky is very nice, though the towers in the back make it look a bit crowded. The character is also looking good, she fits the background well. Nice wallpaper.

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`sjade1

2 years, 2 months ago

 

I have to say I really love what you did with this, especially composition-wise. It's a very clean vector, although the girl does look more technically challenging than the rest of the background. The addition of the crow fits in nicely too :).

Avatar for anidzema
~anidzema

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Beautiful wall. Revision 2 looks better! +fav

Avatar for fookongmick
~fookongmick

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Beautifully done despite using dark colours around the character... although the colour of the subject may look too vivid for me. Nice wall!

Avatar for lovelylayla
~lovelylayla

2 years, 2 months ago

 

i'm not sure i like the raven much but rev2 is better still

Avatar for henana
~henana

2 years, 2 months ago

 

nice wall

Avatar for Fran
`Fran

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Awshh Cilou...you kinda step back in your game again. >: After your Wand of Fortune wallpapers this one appears so rushed...the character is well done, though some strands of her hair are not curvy enough and look very jagged. But aside that, the major issue about this wallpaper are the outlines of the buildings. They look shaky and sort of blocky.

The birds in the sky shouldn't be that focused since they are supposed to be in the distance and not in the focal point.

Your ideas for your walls are pretty awesome but they fail in execution. I wish to see wallpapers in the quality of those Wand of Fortune wallpapers you made a while ago.

Avatar for yuukine
`yuukine

2 years, 2 months ago

 

wow the background is amazing with that awesomely done castle. i also love your vector its so soft and great looking. also second revision is much much better and its certainly one awesome wall you made +

Avatar for Sindel
~Sindel

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Amazing wall!! : D

Avatar for Moon-Flower
~Moon-Flower

2 years, 2 months ago

 

This is so beautiful and dark. I love it. The crows really add to it, and the whole design is well thought through. It's a very beautiful and haunting wallpaper. It's something that will be remembered because it is so haunting.

Avatar for sandiren
~sandiren

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Great wallpaper of black rock shooter

Avatar for Nessbad94
`Nessbad94

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Nicely done! Lovely vector- turned out very good; and idea)) You rule)))

Avatar for Alex30012
$Alex30012

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Awesome! I love everything about it!

Avatar for garah
~garah

2 years, 2 months ago

 

i love black rock shooter...

Avatar for ShiroiGekka
~ShiroiGekka

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Your art style is even better than the original IMO. Awesome job!

Avatar for Kopi
~Kopi

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Wow revision 2 has a totally different feel to it. Great job!

Avatar for vindrezt
~vindrezt

2 years, 2 months ago

 

WoW =D

What more can I say other than I love your style. Your last few walls have blown me away, and this one is no different! Love the atmosphere you've created with this one! ^Ravens are very large birds - about the size of hawks. The size is fine. (However there is something very wrong about its feet) The lineless approach is good on the girl, but you should have done it for the buildings too. Those lines on them are super jagged and wonky, and the clover leaf shapes aren't clean (they're warped and lopsided). If you spent as much effort on the bg as you did on the girl, the wall would be more impressive. You should probably also upload the girl as a vector too, like you did for some of your other ones. :)

Avatar for blurangels
~blurangels

2 years, 2 months ago

 

Nice wall, like the color of it and the looks of it look really nice. Good work

Avatar for Mikamura
~Mikamura

2 years, 2 months ago

 

So dark and mysterious! Super wallie keep it up

it looks super!

Avatar for Zaiakursed
~Zaiakursed

2 years, 2 months ago

 

I like it..

Avatar for metzalx
~metzalx

2 years, 1 month ago

 

I really love your work here. I felt the atmosphere in your wall right when I saw the thumbnail, so that's an indication that the feeling you're trying to portray here works very well :D so...+fav!

But there's one thing I'd like to point out: The vectoring style you're using for the character here makes for rare usage of outlines, but for your background there are a lot of those. Personally I feel that these two styles clash in the way you're using them here, as the outlines are quite distracting and take the focus away from the character.

Avatar for Tetsuzuken
~Tetsuzuken

2 years, 1 month ago

 

Looks cool!

Avatar for Dechuu
~Dechuu

2 years, 1 month ago

 

Both revisions are very good, especially the second one. I'm very impressed. C:

Avatar for redagain
~redagain

2 years, 1 month ago

 

Okay, I'm suspicious of compliments, because I like a lot of crows and of air through dark, closed and weighed. For further demonstrating the sky, they are black and the presence of crows and even the way the character that gives this magnificent aspect.

There is a distinct color to highlight each of the fragments that make up the wallpaper. Also, I might add that the training and even the way in which everything is also positioned itself to scan you showed the MT.

Well, I liked.

Avatar for Merewen
~Merewen

2 years, 1 month ago

 

this is so great _ i like this. great job

Avatar for otakuurule
~otakuurule

2 years, 1 month ago

 

simplified and dramatic, this wallpaper is awesome good job.

Avatar for robitut47
~robitut47

2 years, 6 days ago

 

Black Rock Shooterrrrrr...:D

Avatar for Ichi-HikiOokami
~Ichi-HikiOokami

1 year, 11 months ago

 

i like the simplicity of it =)

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$SaikaFarnese

1 year, 11 months ago

 

This is frickin' awesome!

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~mohicano

1 year, 11 months ago

 

Puffff theres so many things allright with the wall, let's begin though. love the crow, love the fading blue color of her eyes way cooler than the first rev... i think s flawless.. fav!!

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~Kmtm9450

1 year, 11 months ago

 

I like the blue eye flames.Really cool!

Avatar for lirios
~lirios

1 year, 11 months ago

 

love the pose...and the character...and the movie or ova...and the soundtrack viva black rock shooter!!!

Avatar for iamduke
~iamduke

1 year, 10 months ago

 

The depth of color is amazing!

Avatar for medori
~medori

1 year, 10 months ago

 

kawaii ! Really love it

Avatar for Saberclaws
~Saberclaws

1 year, 10 months ago

 

and as a great black rock fan, i just couldnt let this one slide away x), brilliant scan, love it all around!

Avatar for FeMonkey
~FeMonkey

1 year, 10 months ago

 

I really like this Gothic feel, the blue smoke gives this paper an awesome contrast. Thanks!

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~indescribable

1 year, 10 months ago

 

I prefer revision 2 because I like the contrast with the blue and the crow fills some empty space. Great wall c:

Avatar for Twilight9x
~Twilight9x

1 year, 9 months ago

 

nice wall and the change between the two is pretty significant but it's for the better :)

I like how every things a little brighter in the 2nd one

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~lukman89

1 year, 9 months ago

 

wow good work friends, I like the color, pretty simple with not much color, the placement of crows there adds an atmosphere of dark and scary: D. miku looks sexy with a pose like that XD. what's wrong with her​​? good job friend, i like it, thank you for share this wallpapers

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~night150

1 year, 9 months ago

 

It's awesome,the second wallpaper is look more better,the color wasn't so dark and very attractive,thanks for sharing.

Avatar for robin3224
$robin3224

1 year, 9 months ago

 

Yet another awesome work! seriously, enjoy most of your walls.

Avatar for Hikoto
~Hikoto

1 year, 8 months ago

 

Totallly hot. =) The 2nd revision is also a great improvement!

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~suranae

1 year, 8 months ago

 

nice

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~tellitlikeitis

1 year, 8 months ago

 

It's very easy to see that you spent a lot of time on this. The vectoring is very well done and the painted sky is a nice touch. Awesome, awesome job! :)

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~jc4012

1 year, 8 months ago

 

WOW!!!!!! This looks really AWESOME!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

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~shaliniotaku

1 year, 7 months ago

 

wow...it looks really cool nd the girl sure gives a very mysterious yet cool aura...i love her <3

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~spiel

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Wow, this is beautiful :D

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~Hyan

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Agree revision 2 is much better. Nice clear and well positioned wallpaper. Definetly going to my rotation for quite a while. Thanks for this one. =)

Avatar for MagicalMiracle
~MagicalMiracle

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Nice job!! The crow adds to the eeriness XD

Avatar for vizdream
~vizdream

1 year, 6 months ago

 

So beautifull

Avatar for NostalgicSong
~NostalgicSong

1 year, 6 months ago

 

Beautiful, I love the 2nd revision.

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~mustafataher

1 year, 6 months ago

 

WOW, looks awesome, although I would say the crows should some how be fewer than this :), there is a hell big number of em in the background, but any way this is an incredibly good looking wallpaper

Avatar for Elvenmoon
$Elvenmoon

1 year, 5 months ago

 

Beautiful! There was a need for new and different BRS walls. Great work. :D

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~syaheed86

1 year, 4 months ago

 

great work...more brs please...

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~MAGI

1 year, 4 months ago

 

Really Good!!! But the blue flame in the eye is a little to transparent and fake looking... but it still looks amazing!!! Good job!!!

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~skellyyohoho

1 year, 3 months ago

 

dam thats awesome

Avatar for wood222
~wood222

1 year, 2 months ago

 

This wallpaper of BRS is so good. I prefer version 2.

It transmits a good feeling, I really like it.The color scheme is great.

Thanks for sharing this wallpaper :). Hope to see more from you :)

Avatar for Lokilis
~Lokilis

1 year, 1 month ago

 

Nice wallpaper. Second revision is better, brings out the eye colors/flame. Nicely done.

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~Itchy0Head

1 year, 1 month ago

 

:D

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~czarlife215

1 year, 1 month ago

 

nice nice I like it

Avatar for MKLATIS
~MKLATIS

1 year, 4 weeks ago

 

overall a great background, however, I feel it lacks a touch of life into the details of the cathedral ... but anyway it is still a great job n.n

Avatar for Kurokun
~Kurokun

1 year, 1 day ago

 

I like crows, onstage suits much black. A job well done : 3

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~hanpen

11 months, 4 weeks ago

 

cool!!

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~TysonThurston

11 months, 3 weeks ago

 

Great job!

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~jose95123

10 months, 1 week ago

 

nice work, soo cute XD .

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~jose95123

10 months, 1 week ago

 

nice work, soo cute XD .

Avatar for Raven
~Raven

8 months, 2 weeks ago

 

I really love the dark atmosphere and calm before the storm vibe that the wall gives off. :)

Of course the crow adds to this, as well as the clouds shutting out the sunlight. The vector itself is pretty smooth. The lighting works with the scene. I would've liked more dynamic lighting with more shading (to add depth), but for the simplicity of the vector, it works.

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~animeandotakufreak

8 months, 1 day ago

 

great one i love it makes me feel inspired

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~Angelz01

7 months, 3 weeks ago

 

Nice dark wallpaper. Thanks.

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~matheusUzumaki40

7 months, 3 weeks ago

 

Our beautiful image that, shame that Black Rock Shooter OVA and only had an 8 Episodes Anime more turning the picture is even congratulations, liked the quality ^ ^

Avatar for Dragonfly2
~Dragonfly2

7 months, 1 week ago

 

Nice BRS wallpaper, I'm glad I found it today x)

Added to my favs, I like it a lot, just as the anime B)

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~Holonate

7 months, 2 days ago

 

Both versions are amazing but still i'll take the 2nd version. Fav

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~Arumatx

5 months, 2 days ago

 

It's good, especially the version 2 with the crows.

Avatar for Ogriv83
~Ogriv83

3 months, 1 day ago

 

I really like both versions but the 2nd versions is my preferred one

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