Hello! I had a mental block making this wallpaper, I tried 3 players and not got what I wanted. This is Version 1 and gives me the feeling that is not complete. Please critique and give opinions in order to get in Version 2. Thanks HeavenlyxSky by the vector! The processes used were very simple, clouds, brushes, glitter, viento ... Enjoy! (Google Translator) XD
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2 years, 1 month ago
I find the image a bit too harsh on the eyes. Perhaps lower the contrast a little? Maybe you wanna add some design to the bg to match the vector? E.g. chains, stars, stripes? The bg colours are starting to look good though, perhaps experiment with it more. Not too sure about the white and black behind her, they seem out of place.
2 years, 1 month ago
lovely image :]
2 years, 1 month ago
The girl is really charming and attractive. White color arround her and dark background in the wallpaper are drawing wonderful harmony.
2 years, 1 month ago
I like this wallpaper, feels like it has a nice balance to it :)
2 years, 1 month ago
I like your background design but I don't really think the colors match the vector itself. Try going with some more fitting colors that match. Also your signature is a little big. Try reducing the size of your font just a bit and having it fit more down in the corner. Overall though it's really nice.
2 years, 1 month ago
I agree with Mysticmom2 on the colors. The central focus, with the girl and the abstract black pattern looks good, but then all the different shades distract from that, making her seem less vibrant and pale. Maybe if you limited the background to just black and white (still with the circles in black and your abstract pattern) or two shades of red it would look better.
2 years, 1 month ago
I hope you enjoy Version 2
2 years, 1 month ago
Hey,
i don't know to you guys but i think this picture is awesome :DD
2 years, 1 month ago
I just love it..i prefer this second revision..it looks great
2 years, 1 month ago
wow awesome.. i like this wallpaper.:)
2 years, 1 month ago
Oh my gosh, I love this x 1000 XD , it is so cool!!
2 years, 2 weeks ago
a queer sensation..:) cuty
1 year, 10 months ago
nice i like the rt of kantoku is agreat job
1 year, 9 months ago
You sure had a cradle robber block making this wallpaper man but it's really festive
1 year, 1 month ago
it's so cute!!! >.<
7 months, 2 weeks ago
Good.