K-On! Yui paper

Congratulations on your first wall! This is actually pretty neat and simple. I love the concept for it but somehow, you could've arranged the elements in a more attractive and appealing way than it is right now. The render's quite neat, clean, and big as well. As for the resolution of your wall, maybe, only a few would actually enjoy it 'cause most of us don't have that kind of resolution.

Aside from that, here are some few suggestions that I can give to your wall:

• Use the full size of the render. Although there are some jagged lines, you could fix it by blurring it just a bit.
• Add some variations to the composition of the wall by: rotating/tilting the character a bit, adding in more elements, adding more text, some lines, ETC.
• I know that you want your wall to be sketchy on a paper background but don't use that default filter. D: I mean, it is RARELY used at all 'cause it doesn't really give off that sketchy feel. INSTEAD, after making the image B&W, you could add a "sketchy" texture on the character to achieve that style instead of using the default filter.
• Same way goes for the text. Don't use the filter.

Other than that, keep up the good work! :D

Haha I'm a sucker for those crunched up paper designs. Nice!

nice!

the concept here you used is really interesting and grabbed my attention instantly. The crunched up paper effect and the black & white sketchy look makes it look like a thrown away rough sketch.

I agree on the resolution part, please make some more versions of it in typical resolutions that we people have. I don't have any critique about the wall. In my opinion its very well made.

nice idea, nice wall.

This is quite a pretty simple but clean wall that I've seen. Trying to imply that it's a real paper. Great work on pulling this stuff out.

Adding it to my faves.

I Like it

kawaii YUI !!

Lovely. :D I always liked girls with guitars; and guns. :P +1 fav

Simple one, but who cares >D. Great one, i like the crush paper effect!

Thx

Love the effects....

Effect of used paper in the wallpaper is really wonderful and realistic. Let's enjoy music with her. I wish you will make its bigger version.

I think this is rather cute, I like the paper background, but the sketch effect on the girl is a little too sharp I think. Or it seems that way when I view it full-size. This is great for a first wall though, all of my first ones are awful - i'd never try to upload my first tries here ^^

Nicely done, I like the crumpled paper effect. Will go nicely with my minimalist desktop. -thumbs up- ;]

how make tis?

simple but it's really nice.

I love the black and white style. And the crunched paper effect works really well... it adds something to the "this is just a draft" touch. Good!

I really do like the idea of this wall. The only problem I had was when I actually saw it in full view, the paper wasn't perfectly clear. Otherwise, great work!

thanks for this, this is awsome!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! LOOKS FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!! the texture looks so cool!!!!!!!!! AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!

simple and nice. it's simple and i know it.

really nice

Very creative and unique wallpaper, refined and its doodle style looks really attractive

i love this wall *__* add to my favs, thanks

And what's written on the paper ?

I love, good idea!! the best