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°keyrawr

2 years, 3 days ago

Hey guys! I haven't posted a wallpaper in a while. This one is based off of this screencap:

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I changed a few things. I didn't include the nose line because it looked strange in the vector. I hope you enjoy this!

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°GamerchiX

2 years, 3 days ago

I love the cloud you added and I think you did a good job vectoring him. I feel a little more detail could've been given to the hair on the silhouettes though, the left side on that one is really chopped off looking. That aside, I do really like the overall look and vibe the wall gives off. =)

°keyrawr

2 years, 2 days ago

I'll try making the hair a bit smoother and detailed. Thanks so much for the feedback!

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°ghostexist

2 years, 3 days ago

i like this wall! it's funny and creepy in the same time! the only thing in which i'm not sure is the typo. Maybe it should have been in the same perspective as the cross?

°keyrawr

2 years, 2 days ago

I will try this and let you know how it works out. ^^

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°KakashiM

2 years, 2 days ago

The text definitely needs to be in perspective with the big cross in the background (as already mentioned). There is also some kinda noise coming from the emitted glow of those human-dark silhouettes in the background, which I find odd. The main character looks fine, although I would’ve preferred if he wasn’t that close to the border. There are some more other tweaks-changes that you could’ve done to make this better, but…

Not a bad wallpaper, I’d say. It just needs a bit more work in my opinion, that’s all. Anyhow, keep it up.

~sora1

2 years, 2 days ago

nice