This will have to be my first successful vector ever! I had to vector it from a scan from the manga(chapter 103). I guessed most of the colours. This was done using Inkscape. This took god knows how long! But that's mainly due me to stopping and starting :P
I rather like the eyes... Feel free to criticise! Criticism shall help me improve - but you do have to tell me how I can improve :).
Also, adding notes have been enabled, so if there's a spot that you're not satisfied with, just note it :D
On the other hand, if there are good bits, you should add that too. ;]
Revision 2 - I've fixed up the mouth and added a little bit of teeth to it. The shoes are much better now! Thanks to Bantam's advice! =]
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1 year, 11 months ago
lol what's with her mouth.
Also, stroke ends at outlines that don't look like strokes?
Needs work.
1 year, 11 months ago
Her mouth was like that in the manga =/
About the stroke ends... a little too rounded maybe? I'm not sure what you're getting at here...
Thank you for the criticism.
1 year, 11 months ago
Not bad for a first vector, not sure what the source image was as you didn't link any so it's hard to compare. Skin color on the inside of the mouth looks weird, even if it is on the original image, nice eye vectoring! The shine on the shoes needs a little work, perhaps play with the opacity, or gaussian blur it a bit. Keep at it! :)
1 year, 11 months ago
Thank you! I finally see what everyone meant by the mouth now~ :) I overlooked the inside of the mouth when I was fixing up/making up areas of the black and white manga scan - I don't think I can find it on the internet anywhere. I might post it up =]
Thank you for the advice on the shoes, I didn't really like it either :P
1 year, 10 months ago
Glasses and pigtails . Can't get much cuter than that.
1 year, 10 months ago
Haha ^^ Thank you~
1 year, 4 months ago
The mouth looks a little weird and I think need more work. but other than that, everything else looks great for first vector. nice work. looks cute.
2 months, 6 days ago
So cute!!The girl is my favorite!Thank you for your sharing!!