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1 year, 9 months ago
Not a whole lot to say. I made this on GIMP, and this is the first wall I've done on it. It was rather hard, and it took me several days. The results are simple, but I'm fairly pleased with them.
I used [this vector](http://www.animepaper.net/art/62309/kunie-kanbara-vector, this texture and this arrow.
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1 year, 9 months ago
This isn't that bad for a first attempt. It's a little plain looking, though. It holds a lot of potential with the nice vector which is present. I'd like to point out that some spots on the render appear over-sharpened (the point on the arrow, some areas in her hair, ect.). My main suggestion would be to add more effects / factors into it. The texture you used is nice, but it lacks a filled background to accompany it. Experiment with a few more font types and colors to add more complexity with the typography, "Free as the Wind." Also, from what I'm seeing, the blue arrow kind of throws off the flow of the wall. I get the sense that she's falling with the way her hair is directed, and instead of the arrow flowing with her, it is pointing the opposite direction.
Anyhow, keep up the practice! ^^
1 year, 8 months ago
i liked the simplest of the paper but i felt that it need something else like chenge the arrow a little bit the concept is great and how the girl expressed a lot with the sentence but i think if you put a little more of designs could be more beautiful (: