Air Gear Air Skyshine

I love Air Gear and I think this is an great wallpaper! :) The vectoring is really well don it is heard to believe it is your first wallpaper! i love the simple background and how the colors mix together. It would be nice if you could add the Air Gear logo in the lower left corner (but that's just my opinion). XD

This is quite good for a first wall that you have ever done. However, the brightness in the lower left corner is rather overpowering to my eyes. The vector is clean, but maybe the wall would stand out as a whole more if you added a little more detail to him - for instance, more detailing on his eyes and hair (depicted individual hair strands and such). Also, the lighting on his face doesn't balance with how bright the light source actually is. I would tone it down a bit, and experiment more with the background. It seems blurry and rather repetitive; you could get rid of the dots all together and work on more of the cloud type shapes - make it more scenery oriented.

Anyway, good first attempt! Remember to always keep experimenting! ^^

Well, starting with the vector. The detail of the left eye is kind of blurry, and the right eye. But the right eye seems to be doing a bit line of the eye to follow the contour of the tip just above. The details of the traces that highlight the contents of the vector at some points are not very developed, only traces appear to be simple.The colors used in the vector are somewhat too superficial, not giving much emphasis, I think a little more on the application of contrast and brightness with Photoscape can help improve.

As background, I must say that even liked the transparent spheres with the sky behind and this kind of flash, but it was strange too. It is with a great sense of emptiness, which could fill with brushes, some of them you can apply with a more technological, and also place a PNG image of the character in this empty space with a few phrases of motivation, action, typical he says.

Your signature alike, need estarmais detailed, with a decent brand more visible than just the black, as confused about clothes for a moment. The clouds must also be smaller and more visible to occupy the space blue with greater ease and participation plan. Perhaps, some birds can give a more natural too.