A wallpaper by ~Keliose
Submitted 1 year, 7 months ago

Amatsuki Wanna join us...?

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  • Revision 1

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  • Revision 2

    • 2/234454

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~Keliose

1 year, 7 months ago

 

I miss sesion zero :(

Ok, I've been working on this wall for way too long now :P Please comment and give me some support, so I can upgrade the wallpaper in future!

REVISION 2 Thank you for comments! :D As Red-Eclipse sugested, I removed texture from the characters and I changed arrangation a bit. I think the picture is now more consistent :) As for Gloomy-Glo comment - I removed the text, but just because I'm not sure about the font, color and efects... I will try to do something with the text and maybe put it in another revision, but now my mind just need some rest xP The texture in beckground will stay for now - I just need some vivid color there.

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`Red-Eclipse

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Very interesting effects. A tad too much texture on the characters for me. The vertical lines down on them are a bit much. The biggest problem for me however is how the piece is arranged. You have the characters on one side and the shrubbery and text on the other. I think if they weren't so noticeably apart, things would look better. Especially since the text is floating absently. Perhaps if there were less plants and placed behind the people and then the text also closer and lowered, things would work out better. Something like this: http://www.animepaper.net/art/96097/ichigo

With that said, I like the direction the effects and colors were going. Keep up the good work.

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`Gloomy-Gloo

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Aw, Amatsuki <3 I love this scan and the colors in this piece. The cherry tree on the side also fits them pretty well.

However, the texture on the right side by the characters bother me. I don't think it is necessary; the wallpaper would probably look cleaner without it. I would also prefer a textless version since I think the text makes the wall look a bit tacky.

Other than that, nice job :)

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~Kurokun

1 year, 7 months ago

 

a good image amatzuki wooooo °(^.^)

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~Muraki3777

1 year, 7 months ago

 

I like what you did with the characters...I think the effects are amazing...but I don't really like the background...I think it's too much color overall...also the color shadow on the letters seems a bit off in the first revision...I like the flowers of the second revision...

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$kokun

1 year, 7 months ago

 

I miss Session Zero too. Boo. I'm not really active in the forums here, so I feel your pain.

I love the bright colors in the background, but this isn't really sharp enough for me. The characters are alright, they give off a dreamy feel which isn't bad. But when the wall started to load for me, my immediate though on the upper left corner was, "Wow, I hope that gets clearer when it's done loading. Oh. It is done." I don't usually mind grunge, but this is too blurry for me. It reminds me of my early attempts at walls when I'd resize a brush too much and it was hard to tell what it was supposed to look like. That might not be what's happened here, but that's what I think of.

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$ravensangst

1 year, 7 months ago

 

I really like the revision. It was a good base, but this is much more artistically picturesque. Good Job!!

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~Mikamura

1 year, 7 months ago

 

love the colors in the characters, but the background is too "still" maybe a real life picture would help?

keep it up looks great!

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~Nakuruyasha

1 year, 7 months ago

 

nice wallpaper. Thank you

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200M

1 year, 5 months ago

 

i loved

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~princesskatie

1 year, 1 month ago

 

Great use of half tone effect! I'm usually not a fan of it, but I love it here. I also like the color combination. :) Purple leaves + green background with a lot of yellow in the subject? Color theory approves. ;)

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~calie1

1 year, 1 month ago

 

i really like it, thank you very much !

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~Katumbiria

9 months, 5 days ago

 

It is good wallpaper. The color calm the heart

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~ajkejkw

8 months, 5 days ago

 

Good..

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~izp

1 month, 1 week ago

 

great

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