A wallpaper by ↺NosVII
Submitted 1 year, 7 months ago

Ayase Hazuki Autumn Days

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Autumn Days Ayase Hazuki Wallpaper
  • Revision 1

    • 1/234939
  • Revision 2

    • 2/234940

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NosVII

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Has been a long time ago since I made a wallpaper. So here is a new one based on an eye-catching scan.

The scan:Kirino

First step was to create a vector of the character. Which can be found here with a full description about it as well:Kousaka Kirino

I wanted to make an autumn wallpaper because at the time it was right around the corner. Although not making it to my intended deadline for autumn according to the astronomical calender, weather-wise it is still around the corner here.

My intention was to create the whole wall in Illustrator. The background is not that complex and tried to keep it a bit similar as to the scan. I experimented with several complex things, but that didn't work out and removed it from the wall. So there are 2 Revs, a clean one and one with leaves.

I hope you like it.

Comments/suggestions/critiques etc. are very appreciated. Thank you.

Enjoy.

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$irumy3

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Nice job with background! Nice,simple and clean wallpaper! I Like :D

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~kaoken92

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Dude thats awesome.

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~bluelion

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Autumn days make the beatuful girl become a beautiful lady. Orange colors in the wallpaper are drawing graceful atmosphere of autumn very well.

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^nat

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Definitely prefer the tree leaves version, seems a little too empty when it's just the sky, but the leaves scattering adds a nice tough of detail. Beautiful vector, love the soft coloring, especially in her hair. It's nicer than in the original :3 Great colors for the background too, it really creates that autumn feeling <3

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$xbob117

1 year, 7 months ago

 

This is a very interesting wallpaper as you made the style of the paper very strong toned with a high texture especially in the colors of the girl in it. very well done indeed!1

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~Takahashi

1 year, 7 months ago

 

It's so cute. The vector is very well done as well.

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~zero-r

1 year, 7 months ago

 

It’s a nice vector. Sadly, I can’t say the same about the background. Frankly, there isn’t really a background to speak of.

The sky, which makes up to about 80% of the wall, is rather empty and dull to look at. Clouds are hardly visible and they lack definition. The way the falling leaves were arranged feel somewhat unnatural, not to mention weird. Having them placed more randomly within the BG (and also FG) would’ve been better.

Now, you could’ve made the background less empty and more compelling by adding more trees in the distance (side by side; right and left), a couple of lampposts, some more falling leaves, etc. All these could’ve also helped the whole wallpaper in terms of depth, which right now is pretty much non-existent.

I do like the overall color scheme though.

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~asian-winter08

1 year, 7 months ago

 

exactly what im looking for.

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$dannyboy149

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Great Vector and nice colors

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^Yina www.kisuki.net

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Sorry to say this, but when you said "background", my first thought was "What backgroud...?". You simply just extended the scan by using some similiar colours, you didn't even recreate the clouds from the original scan. ):

The floating leaves seem too stiff, I'd either add more different sized leaves or different looking leaves. The text looks way too strong and heavy compared to the soft colours of the bg. The placement is kinda off too. For an empty bg like this, a two liner + some kind of logo would look the best I think. You could also add silhouettes of far away buildings to fill the bottom part of the wall. And for the upper left corner, a crescent moon would look nice.

As you can see, there are so many more details you could add to the wall without making it look busy or crowded. You did a pretty good job on the vector (though I personally don't really support 100% scan to vector vectors). But a nice looking vector put on a random bg is just not enough for making a good wall. :\

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`Tsunoh

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Excellent job on the vector, I like the softness and blending of the colors. Crisp lines too, but I'm kinda with Yina on the BG looking a little empty. Some clouds would be good, in my opinion. Maybe this tutorial would help?

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~AznRiceBoi

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Wow! Great wall, really love the soothing colors and the autumn feel. Great work!

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~Scar-Leg

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Kirino can't be this cute!

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~giannisong

1 year, 7 months ago

 

wow.color is real..great!!!!

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`yuukine

1 year, 7 months ago

 

gorgeous vector, its so detailed and beautiful colors :D+

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$Doggy

1 year, 7 months ago

 

so cold here >_< kirino look so warm though T_T

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~mannyh

1 year, 7 months ago

 

Fantastic Job!!!

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~Floow

1 year, 6 months ago

 

Aww Kirino is so cute ! Awesome Wallaper o.o

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~Miyu-Tenshi

1 year, 6 months ago

 

This is super adorable! I love the simplicity! Great work <3

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~1010rikku

1 year, 5 months ago

 

I love the warm colors you chose.

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~1010rikku

1 year, 5 months ago

 

I love the warm colors you chose.

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~Zero-Shadow

1 year, 5 months ago

 

good work with the wallpaper, it's looks beautiful and smooth. but i don't like the front on revision 2 ^^;

you could make the clouds more visible, and the falling leave looks unnatural.

i like simple wallpaper too, but this one looks a bit too empty for me

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~chikarcas

1 year, 2 months ago

 

Good job the colors in the background combine very well with the character

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~sakurina90

1 year, 1 month ago

 

it's very nice! good work, congratulations!!!

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~ivankwok291

1 year, 1 month ago

 

Awesome! The revision 1 is already Great! Revision 2 with the details makes it superb.

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~Jay1

8 months, 1 week ago

 

Very nice paper ! I like it :)

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~noorrasyiqah

5 months, 3 weeks ago

 

So lovely wall and it give a peaceful scene at the same time. It look great for my desktop and poster.

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~Animejunkieblog

4 months, 2 weeks ago

 

Simply Awesome, No words to describe the Art love it

AnimeJunkieBlog - This art will be posted there ;3

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~Rev01Yeti

4 months, 3 days ago

 

A simple concept, but a pleasing wallpaper, and those leafs aren't that bad lurking in that corner. Amazing vectoring skills. Oh and all hail Kirino, of course...

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