Fate Stay Night COUNTDOWN IN THE RAIN

Glad to see another entry from you.

I really like the concept of this wall, however I think there are a few design flaws that needs to be addressed:

• In my honest opinion, the black space on top and the bottom doesn't create any good effect on the image.
• Follow the previous point, the "COUNTDOWN IN THE RAIN" text ruined the atmosphere of the image.
• Saber and Emiya can appear a little bit bigger to fill up the spaces.
• The rain textures used is too "sharp" compared to other elements of the wall.
• The blending of Emiya with the rain effect around his right shoulder should be worked on a little bit more.

That's all, other than that it's a great looking wall, I like the simplicity behind it. Good luck and keep up the good work.

Interesting effects. I think you might have gone a little to far with it though. It looks a tad bit overworked in that there is too much to look at. I'm not sure if it is the character's lines fighting with the brightness of the background, or if its the rain on glass effect fighting with the rest of the image, but there isn't really a nice balance to the picture.

If you wanted to fix this up, I'd say you would have to figure out what you would want in the foreground, middle ground, then the background first. From the looks of where the wallpaper is now, it looks like you want all three. So saying that the rain on glass is foreground, it would have to have more presence in the darker places of the picture. Then the middle ground would either need to be some what darker if you wanted to have the brightness of the light shining through the back. The bright lines really take away from the rest of the wallpaper.