A wallpaper by `Shimazaki
Submitted 1 year, 6 months ago

Fairy Tail Fairy in the Water

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Fairy in the Water Fairy Tail Wallpaper

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`Shimazaki

1 year, 6 months ago

 

Here is my Latest wallpaper, while vectoring the scan i changed her mouth and her bikini so i hope some poeple like it like that also it was kinda hard for me making the BG since im still inexpirienced with BGs

http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/561235

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`Cilou

1 year, 6 months ago

 

You did an awesome job from the original scan! The only thing is the BG... too flat. The concept is goos, but you could added some reflexion on water, or more shading or texture on rocks. You have a good potential, so keep it up! Good luck!

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^Vampluva Future type Person

1 year, 6 months ago

 

I like your concept, it's quite nice. Your vector is really well done too, however she seems cut off at the legs... maybe add a little flesh tone under the water so it seems as though you can see her legs through it, as you would if you were standing in water. Plus she has no reflection of light from the water on her legs as you would have either. The water needs brights... reflection of the light to give it a sense of movement. As it is it is flat like frosted glass or even like blue ice. As Cilou commented, the Rocks need a little more definition to them, I'd suggest some darker shadows where you have the bolder lines.

Again, I like the idea but with a little more work this wall could be brilliant rather than nice.

Keep up the good work =3

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~rin22

1 year, 6 months ago

 

Good job i love lucy ^^, the color is great! congratulations ^^

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~devil112

1 year, 6 months ago

 

OMG LUCY <3 !!!

Good job :)

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$toxynusca

1 year, 6 months ago

 

The background needed more works, and the water still looked plain. Mountain background missed another touch. The bikini girl is alright though (maybe she needed another touch on her skin), but when it mixed with overall graphics, it made her quality visual goes down. I'm looking forward to the fixed version of this. Thanks

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~melodia

1 year, 5 months ago

 

The drawing is good but the coloring is a bit flat. Shading and highlights are too light and the background lacks texture. The text would also work better if the font matched the theme of the picture. The colors are smooth and soothing, though. And the lines have a pencil-like quality to them which complements the soft colors. Overall, good work on this!

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$vanreivaj

1 week, 5 days ago

 

Nice job. I'm agree with some suggestions... like adding more details in the background... also... more steam or wetting effects will make this wallpaper even more amazing

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