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|! Painful Past !| Fullmetal Alchemist Wallpaper

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~sandybelly

1 year, 5 months ago

My lovely character EDWARD

when I ever look at him I got that pain in my chest

I try to make this wallpaper more colorful to take his pain away but I think it didn't work

I want to give my thank to (lola-girl) for the vector

hope you'll like the WP :)

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☆Bantam Anime Seagull

1 year, 5 months ago

Love the background colors and stripes, makes it feel very serene, glad you added some glow in the foreground too, you're good at that! Adds some depth! Nice work!

~sandybelly

1 year, 5 months ago

I'm glad that you like it. thanks for the comment

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~Muraki3777

1 year, 5 months ago

I love the background...it's cheerful and soft and bright! I like how the strips and the clouds and brushes mix with each other...it gives a wonderful effect...but having Edward with a frowned face kinda cuts that effect...but it's still awesome nonetheless!

~sandybelly

1 year, 5 months ago

thanks for your comment actually I agree with you about ed & the background but I'll try my best in future

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~lumberjacck

1 year, 5 months ago

Ah, I thought he looks familiar. :D It's from Full Metal Alchemist. :P Great wallpaper. ;) +1 fav

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~sandybelly

1 year, 5 months ago

I'm so grateful for your comment

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~lumberjacck

1 year, 5 months ago

You're welcome. :)

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~zero-r

1 year, 5 months ago

There a couple of things that I feel are bit unnecessary, like the scribble/pattern thing behind Ed’s back. There is also some misspelling on the word painful (you wrote “pinful”), but that’s an easy fix, and some visible jaggedness (or something) on Ed’s signature/text.

Not that bad, though. The overall composition is rather solid and the color combination in the background is somewhat nice.

~sandybelly

1 year, 5 months ago

thanks for the notes I corrected the spelling

as you see I'm just a beginner with designing so there will be some mistake in my designs

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~kyoshiro20

1 year, 5 months ago

Maybe it's just me, but I've never really been a fan of stripes to be honest, I feel like it's hiding a good background. But I actually do like the green tracing next to Ed. I also would like to see the text bigger, because I strain my eyes to look at what it says.

~sandybelly

1 year, 5 months ago

I'm so grateful for your comment

about the text I didn't really want to focus on it