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1 year, 5 months ago
Hi there so after a long time finally I have made an other wallpaper, it took me a long time cause I`m really lazy and I had a lot of things to do for school.
Hope you will like this wallpaper ^_^.
This is the scan that I used http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/491107 ,I changed a lot of things but hope that you will like it.
All suggestions are welcome and see you next time ^_^
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1 year, 5 months ago
Looks cool, although I'd want to see more flow in this, like.. The points in the background following the line or something. I yet have to understand why is the line coming out of her mouth. xD Anyhow, her eyes are really catchy, I like 'em. The overall idea is cool too.
1 year, 5 months ago
Oh! I recognised this scan as soon as i saw your wallpaper. Even though it differs from the original scan! I was looking at it like "somethings missing" The hands!! There not there O: Haha
Nice clean and neat vectoring, Oh and coloured lines!! Yay! A tip on your vectoring though, at the skin under her hair, the vectoring seems a little to flowing? like you've just continued the vectoring path all the way through and it makes a look a little, un-natural?
Green is my favourite colour and this wall looks awesome in the tones of green you've chosen. The idea i get from this wall is something, like her singing and the bg is a visual representation of her voice? im not sure if thats what you meant? But thats what i 'think' it is?
IMO her eye should look a little more relaxed the only reason her eye looked so good in the scan was because of her hands being infront of her face, like taking a picture and looking out at you. And when you look out at something or further away your eye opens more than normal. But.. theres there is nothing in this wall that insinuates that, thats what she's doing.. and therefore looks a little... stary. Just moving her top eye lash down a little and curving it a little more would have solved that :)
Good luck on future wallpapers! Konkon
1 year, 5 months ago
This remind of a candy type...lol dunno why. But hey! Excellent wallie! i Love it so much! The background and the little details (butterflies and the musical...things) are really cool! You made a good job! Thumbs up It will be great if you do revisions with other colors. Just saying. Anyways, thank you for sharing! :)
1 year, 5 months ago
Excellent work. I really like it.
Keep it up!