Velvet Room Christmas - Persona Wallpapers - Video Games Wallpapers

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~miahpt

1 year, 5 months ago

This is the first wallpaper I upload ever, I hope you like it!

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^Vampluva Future type Person

1 year, 5 months ago

Okay, a tip.

Make bigger resolutions, yours is far too small. It only just goes over the minimum resolution allowed on AP. 1920x1080 is generally a good resolution to use.

I like the idea you had, however the image doesn't seem to mesh well with the background.

Good work for your first wall submitted though and I look forward to seeing more from you =3

~blueangel06661

1 year, 5 months ago

Good Comment

It's pretty nice! Congrats on your first WP upload! It's an accomplishment huh?

Anyways a few things you should work on:

Typography: The text "merry christmas etc" seems very lazily slapped onto the paper without much thought. It you would've taken the time with perhaps a gradient overlay and a drop shadow or stroke and not have it all on a single line, larger font size, and place it somewhere else like in the empty spaces beside the girls it "may" have helped. Typography is always a tough thing to get a hang of. I still struggle with it sometimes.
foreground, middle ground, background: I think if you do this type of wallpaper it helps to have all 3. Right now you have 2/3 [middle ground (render) and background].. I guess the persona text "could" be considered foreground but what may have helped is some extra brushes along the bottom of the renders and on the side or something. ^___^

And that's all the tips I have to offer! Best of luck and love the paper!

~andrelimfj

1 year, 5 months ago

Great work on your first WP! The texture looks smooth and sleek.

Having a bigger variety of larger resolutions will make it better though. It might also be just me, but I think having the P3,P4 text seperated at the sides will make it better.