A wallpaper by ~MisterCoco-kun
Submitted 1 year, 4 months ago

Hyakka Ryouran Samurai Girls Pray For Japan <3

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Pray For Japan <3 Hyakka Ryouran Samurai Girls Wallpaper

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~MisterCoco-kun

1 year, 4 months ago

 

Hey, everyone !

This is a wallpaper dedicated to Japan, hit by the big earthquake on March, 11th. I wanted to focus on the color red, which is the main color for Japan and Jyûbei from Hyakka Ryôran :)

The vector of Jyûbei came from the one vectored by Akiranyo, which you can download here. Thanks to him and to his hard work !

Please, feel free to rate it and comment ! :D

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$proxima

1 year, 4 months ago

 

I think that it is nice of you to credit Aki for the vector, but I think that I have seen those cranes before also. Be careful, there are a lot of elements in this wall that cause me to feel as if I have seen it before, several months back; in connection with, Japan Relief or Six For Tea- Ganbare Nippon!

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~Hoser1358

1 year, 4 months ago

 

Jubei's colors are more of a pink.It looks like you literally just slapped on a vector onto a premade background without doing ANYTHING. The background text saying "Ganbatte Nihon" looks really bad, and makes the background not look clean.If indeed this was made completely by you, I'd like to know the translation of the text in the bottom right.

Seriously, if you're gonna make wallpapers do them right. Listen to people's advice and do revisions, don't just spit out bad wallpapers everyday, especially when they don't have much effort put into them and aren't done by you.

It may sound harsh but its my honest thoughts, and a bunch of others would probably agree

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~Ninjatako911

1 year, 4 months ago

 

this is one of the best ive seen japan would be proud

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~DuroDeMatar

1 year, 4 months ago

 

It's pretty good and simple, I like the font and style used in the "ganbatte nihon" in the bg. The tsuru's (crane's) comming from the "rising sun" of Japan's flag looks pretty good too.

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`akiranyo Astraea

1 year, 4 months ago

 

Usually I'm pretty happy when people use my vectors, but on other hand if you use a advanced vector like my Jubei, you should put also a lot more effort into the background and not just hope that "the vector looks good" so sure it will get accepted. A unwritten rule between the vector artists and the ones who use them is to put a similar effort into the background, as was into the character itself. Your background is now quite plain, at least if the character would get some brushes arround,that she would not looks like floating in the air. (transforming shapes can be pretty useful for this) The crane brushes with the red sun are decent, but they take only a small part of the wallpaper and are not really the main focus, despite the brighter background. Also not sure if a character with weapons is the best choice to remind those sad days for Japan. In overall, the only thing what I would recommend to put more time and effort into your wallpapers. You are here only a few days, and you already making one after the other, and so far nobody really was impressed by them. As we say, quality over quantity.

PS. By using my vectors next time, please use whole thumbnails of them. Like this

[vector]Yagyuu Jubei

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~snake2010

1 year, 4 months ago

 

nice work!

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~tonytaker

1 year, 4 months ago

 

she's #1 the show

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~hanpen

1 year, 4 days ago

 

Great message!!

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~pandev92

3 months, 4 weeks ago

 

:3 ooow, so sweet girl and a good anime

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