Summer in Clannad

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1 year, 4 months ago

Hi, this is my 2nd wall ever created it with Ps and Ai hope everyone like it. Clannad is one of my favorite store anime all time, the graphic is smooth and store line is bitter sweet. I vector Nagisa and the cherry blossom and import to PS and layered from there. 40 layer and 2 week on and off to get it finished. once again, hope everyone like it,

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`Red-Eclipse

1 year, 4 months ago

The major blur on some of the flowers are too much. Also you confuse the eyes on what the depth is when you decide to blur them randomly and not based on placement. You have petals and flowers blurred all over and laying on top of each other. If the main character is the thing NOT blurred, everything on HER depth will not be blurred as well. So this would only include the flowers and petals closest to her on the bottom.

The lily pad blur in the back also makes them look like giant amoebas. She's being attacked by micro life forms. They should not be at the same blur as the flowers we are peering through from.

Lastly the color choices could have been different. The yellow she has on clashes with the purple. It's water right? Go with blue and hints of green.

Overall the vector is nice but the composition and background you need work on. Tone down the blur. Hopefully I see a second version for this with the fixes.

~Mamuru

1 year, 4 months ago

I agree, way too much blur..

$proxima

1 year, 4 months ago

I agree with `Red-Eclipse. It's a lesson for me to keep in mind for any submissions I attempt. It is a nice effort, but the blur was thoughtlessly overused.

~Cqi

1 year, 4 months ago

Thanks Red, I will try to play around it and fix the over blur problem I had.

~alayrachan

1 year, 4 months ago

the wall is beautiful and nice but look if you can create an other version. good job goob job... ^^

~bwest

1 year, 4 months ago

Love Clannad!

~Crapgame87

1 year, 4 months ago

I agree with everyone about the blur, although I can't see "amoebas" :) My problem is that looking at the pic gives my eyes a bit of discomfort. Fix the blur thing and this will be a very nice wallpaper :)

~Yeshaih

1 year, 4 months ago

I agree the blurring seems random, it really confuses the eyes. If you still have a file of this wallpaper before you blurred, it would be nice if you could try blurring it again. You made a nice vector, this is really good for a second wallpaper

~alayrachan

1 year, 4 months ago

i love the sakura in the revision 2. good job!!

~Cqi

1 year, 4 months ago

Thank you alayrachan, I made the first wall too busy and used too much blur. I'm still new at this feel free point out improvement :D

~ChaosOverlordXIX

1 year, 1 month ago

Hmm very cute plus the flowers in the scenery,makes this wallpaper look perfect,i always treasured key visualarts artwork,this wallpaper is great,excellent.

~Eteocles

1 year, 1 month ago

loved it

$maximatum99

9 months, 3 days ago

good job!