"Let Me Out!"

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~Hoser1358

3 months, 2 weeks ago

Okay.. I haven't done any elaborate wallpapers in awhile. Hopefully you people can help me out a bit, Main issues with this so far is the grass, other things I already have an idea on how to fix. There will likely be a version with a framing.

I need to define some lines in this better. will be done within a couple of weeks hopefully.

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☆Bantam bantibeard

3 months, 2 weeks ago

Nice work! What a funny image to vector! Like the grass on the balcony! It would have been cool to enhance the glass effect a little with a few lines or streaks or something, I'm not sure how to describe what I'm trying to say :P

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~DuroDeMatar

3 months, 2 weeks ago

I'm sure you're saying to add the things you mentioned so we can tell that there's a glass there.

Regards the wall: Original choice for a vector, the vector is pretty well done.

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~Hoser1358

3 months, 2 weeks ago

yeah, its gonna be a little bit hard, but i think I'll just have to play around with some light, like the shine/glare you get from actual glass. There is a little bit added. The version with the framing will be more obvious sooo yeah.

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~ArslanSSS

3 months, 2 weeks ago

Wow, this is a different wallpaper, like Bantnam said a nice choice for vector, loved the wall, Thanks for sharing.

$irumy3

3 months, 2 weeks ago

I really like this. Something different and vector is clean and great. Hope to see more!

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~Ryoukun

3 months, 2 weeks ago

I don’t know about the grass (can’t comment about that), but to me the whole wallpaper lacks a better sense of depth between the back-highway guard rail and the front-character. Overall, everything looks and feels flat. Textures could use some more work too. They look rather low quality too me, plus the rail doesn’t seem to have one, which is kinda odd, if we take in consideration that everything else in the background is textured.

I would have preferred if the whole thing was a bit more vibrant and colorful. It seems like we are looking at the scene thru a piece of a smoked glass (I don’t know, I’m just guessing here since I don’t see anything regarding that on your description). Honestly, I don’t think it looks good as it makes the colors dull. Anyway, I like the idea; it’s the overall execution that I’m not really fond of. By the way, why is it that you named it “let me out”? Isn't she outside? Shouldn’t “let me in” a more fitting title for this?

~Hoser1358

3 months, 2 weeks ago

Well i originally had a framing as if it were like a TV or a picture that is framed. I guess the title could really go either way depending. Oh right, I completely forgot about this. I removed the framing because the wallpaper.. is meant to fill the entire screen, so it uses the borders of your computer screen as a frame Will work on texturing. I'll try and see if vibrant colors look better. I just realized i have to do some shadows, which will hopefully make it look less flat. I find grass a pain to do, and I'm too lazy to look into a tutorial on how to make good grass, that's not on a 2-D birds eye view. I'm new to making complete "nature" backgrounds from scratch, so can't really expect to much from me