A vector by ~TheAkuma
Submitted 1 year, 1 week ago

Shibano Kaito Mochi!

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Mochi! Shibano Kaito Vector
  • Revision 1

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  • Revision 2

    • 2/256970

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~TheAkuma

1 year, 1 week ago

 

This is my first time uploading anything to this website. This is my entry for the Vectadesu contest.

This vector was made in Illustrator CS5. No raster effects whatsoever as per the contest rules. The theme is Food so I chose a girl eating mochi.

Thank you and enjoy.

here is the original: Shibano Kaito's kr+7 - New Year's Girl

the 2nd revision is JPEG because the first revision, PNG, made the leg look horrible...

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°KopyKat nya?

1 year, 1 week ago

 

o wow this is sooooo cute! i love it! the kimono looks great and so does the hair and skin, the gradient work looks great. the only thing i would say is that the quality of the front leg isn't up to the same quality as the rest of the image, the gradient work isn't good. but thats all^^

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~ExzcellionGamma

1 year, 1 week ago

 

Was battling my thoughts and this side of me now delighted at this vector vanquished the other. Summarizing the beauty of it on high... "Well done sir."

Now wondering if one can glomp then eat at that large mochi(?) on which she's lying down.

A +1 for you and keep it up!

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^Vampluva Future type Person

1 year, 1 week ago

 

Okay, well where do I start other than saying OMGOODNESSFREAKINGAWESOME! xD

As I said to you in the sb, when you first arrived in the sb and asked about joining Vecta Desu, and then chose THAT scan, I was pretty sceptical. I thought, no way is this newbie going to pull a difficult scan like that off well. Well, hell... you well and truly proved me wrong and Wow!! You just blew that scan out of the water and made it your own with the colour changes. I'm loving the colouring, it really livens the character up, she seemed a little muted beforehand. But now she really POPS!! The green for the Mochi was a bold move but one that paid dividends, it really does add to the overall awesomeness of the vector.

Your shading though is what has me going gaga over this vector the most. The gradation of the shades is just so natural, it all blends so beautifully. Your lines are crisp and clean, no leaks in colour that I can see at all. A few shadows could have been added in the clothing, but it's not glaringly obvious stuff. Btw, I love the pattern on her Yukata, superbly done!! Your colouring on the gold ring too is just wonderful, you really do use colours wonderfully! My only issue with her at all is with her eyes, I think they needed some more depth, a bit more 'life' to them. Compared to the rest of the vector her eyes seem just a little flat in comparison.... oh and the no fingernails on her dangling hand...

oh and I so want those Usagi clogs, they look so damn cute =P

Well done and good luck in VD. Don't forget to link your vector in the VD entry forum!!

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~Lokilis

1 year, 1 week ago

 

Wow! I love this!! You've done a fair job of boosting the colors from the scan. The vector itself is excellent! I love the composition of the image. Splendid, splendid! I've gotta use this somewhere.... Thank you for this great vector.

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acidtreat101 Possible new vector is 244501

1 year, 1 week ago

 

Hey Akuma, haven't see you in a while so I am glad to see that you finished your VectaDesu entry. This is really good work, considering it's your first on this site, and it's definitely a step above the work I saw you do before. The gradients look good, she is really shiny and cute. The only thing I would critique is that some of the outlines look a bit point, like for example on the toe of her front foot, the stocking looks a bit too squarish at parts with straight angles are opposed to curves. Maybe the scan was like that but personally I like to make the vector artwork very flowing and smooth, especially on this style of vector. Anyways good work and I look forward to seeing more of your works!

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`SamB

1 year, 1 week ago

 

I really like your vector especially for its brillant colors and how you used shades. My compliments. Absolutely added on my favs!!

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~VestigeL Moping around

1 year, 1 week ago

 

Oh wow, this is eye-poppingly awesome. The final result is miles ahead of the source! What I can't get enough of are the patterns on the clothing coupled with the lighting and shadow. Pure beauty. Your final product is also so much more vibrant than the original; something I really enjoy seeing in vectors.

Though... upon full-view the lineart could use some more refinement. A lot of the lines are quite jagged and really do take away from what would be a brilliant piece of work. The hands suffer the most from this making them seem unnatural. However, it's pretty amazing what newcomers can do; my first is not even comparable to this. Anyways, good job and good luck!

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Bantam Anime Seagull

1 year, 1 week ago

 

For a first time vector this is amazing, you have some skill with the illustrators. Just goes to show what a new user can do!

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°Gii

1 year, 6 days ago

 

Damn this is really good way better than my first attempt ._.

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$ClockWorkLemons The Idolfag

1 year, 6 days ago

 

Really amazing job akuma! I'm sure i could think of some criticism if i thought hard enough, but it's such a pleasure to look at, that i'm not sure i want to.

Keep up the good work, i look forward to further vectors from you!

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~ia-chan

1 year, 6 days ago

 

Clean vector you made here . You're really good for your first vector here . It's really clean and nice +Fav !

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~exorcistas

1 year, 5 days ago

 

Ta cool rabbit that drawing and the colors so beautiful and very strong like alice in wonderland

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~joab

1 year, 4 days ago

 

SO COOL! Vectors like that really inspire people!!

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`kuryuki

1 year, 4 hours ago

 

Nice work! love the overlapping u been a while since I've seen this kind. Good luck on the contest~!

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~Rissa-chi

11 months, 4 weeks ago

 

this is pure awesomeness. love the vector and the vibrant colors I also love the artist who draws this and you've done it brilliantly. great job!

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~hanpen

11 months, 4 weeks ago

 

Good jobs! sexy hip and nice color!!

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`reesha cheers!!!! to LIFE!

11 months, 3 weeks ago

 

When I first saw this vector a few days ago, it really caught my attention. I really like the shades of colours used. It is vibrant and beautiful, compared to the original scan. The pattern on the clothes are fine and pretty. =3 I really like the style, to be honest. Plus, this can be used to make a pretty cute wallie. XD

A frist vector can be a good vector, as long as you have the skills and experience.

Great job! Hope to see more of your vector in the future =)

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~CompleXjny

11 months, 2 weeks ago

 

THis was Nice. THe color stands out, kimomo was looked good. fav

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~KiyanaIkebana

9 months, 3 weeks ago

 

I love the fabulous colors!!! it is so beautiful smooth! I love how you make the details on her kimono, just looks so elegant! I hope to see more vector!

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~barraq2

9 months, 1 week ago

 

nice work

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~Satorin3rd

6 months, 1 week ago

 

So nice!! The girl is my favorite!! Thank you!

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