A vector by ~VestigeL
Submitted 1 year, 2 days ago

Mashiroiro Symphony Sena Airi

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Sena Airi Mashiroiro Symphony Vector
  • Revision 1

    • 1/257360
  • Revision 2

    • 2/257361

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~VestigeL

1 year, 2 days ago

 

Revision 1: PNG [Note: The bread wrapping is transparent]

Revision 2: JPEG

Well, this is my entry for VectaDesu #16. I'm a bit surprised I actually finished in time, I thought this would never see the light of day [especially with my professional procrastination skills]. For the scan, I had to dig through multiple image boards to find it at a decent size. Anyways, I wanted to try a whole vector using gradient mesh; what I've learned: way too time consuming and frustrating. In hindsight, I should've chosen a scan with a livelier colour palette.

Original Scan: Source 1, Source 2

Time: 6 Weeks

Tools: Adobe Illustrator CS5

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200M

1 year, 2 days ago

 

Mmmmm..I think it look better in the thumbnail but when you Full view its look a little blured.

Awesome work extending the hands.Its look good, but if you are using mesh try to make skin, hair and clothes look different.But otherwise the line art looks great and if you want to make the colors more 'livelier' you can always try new colors :) good look in VDesu.

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~VestigeL Slow on the uptake

1 year, 23 hours ago

 

Thanks for the comment Matias, greatly appreciated. I do agree that things turned out a lot blurrier than I had hoped; by the time I had realized this, the deadline was breathing down my back and I had to make do with what I had. Thanks again.

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~julit

1 year, 1 day ago

 

hi

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~rockman204

1 year, 1 day ago

 

very nice

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~frederico

11 months, 3 weeks ago

 

linda

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$Hiroppy

8 months, 2 weeks ago

 

so lovely!

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~yomi0817

2 months, 2 weeks ago

 

Quite a fine vector, although i can't really compare cos i can't click on the scan link. So im just gonna say what i can see of this vector. Ok..so it's nice and clean. I wish you could play around with those dark lines/spots beneth her eyes and make em less prominent to give it a more refined look. Plus extending the scan would be more useful for the people who'd use this as resource to make walls. Now those two things are just suggestions for improvements and not judgements on what you did. As for the vector itself, it's a Job well done specially considering if it's your First vector ^^

For extreme nitpicking just have to say, since her skin tone is quite fair..her right hand (the one on the hand) seems a lil dim if you notice the four forefingers and compare with the overall skin tone. It might be alright if it was a shadow but since it's open and the light should be on it, just thought of pointing this out. Forgive me if it's just my monitor playing with me.

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