Hyakka Ryouran Samurai Girls Are you nervous?

I bit simple (overall feeling) and also it could be a bit bigger, 2200 pixels is noting extra novadays. Anyways, I have seen this vector in the forum, and since Hates already gived some good suggestions I didn't really wanted intervene. Seems like though, you didn't changed too much, too bad, it could be much better with a few easy steps. First work on the lines (how often I told this in the recent weeks to new vector artist!) cause they often look like kinda stroked. Not sure why is that, certain ones are good and certain not, maybe you rushed it a bit. Also, it lacks contrast. Not sure if the source was a screenshot, but colors need to be more "lively", even if Hyakka's art is often less colorful compared to other series. I left a few notes on the vector itself, but I say here too, be careful about sudden changes in the thickness of the line. Line size variety is good and cool, but you cannot apply a other line/shape from the half with a double thickness, of course this could be prevented if you would use anchor points (guess you don't use it yet) Good luck with the next one, and maybe you will edit this too after some time (I did it with many of my old vectors too)

beautiful vector <3