Alpha Spring outfit

This is quite the improvement from your first vector and I commend you for that. The gradients used on her clothing is quite nice. However, numerous problems still linger. As aki has already pointed out on your first vector, you still need to work on your lines quite a bit. A lot of it still looks stroked (is it?), some more natural thickness variation would be much appreciated. A lot of the lines are "bumpy" where they should be smooth (especially around the hair); it seems your overusing the number of anchor points, try reducing them and attempt more bezier curves. The ends of your lines are very inconsistent, some ending off sharp whilst others rounded. At smaller resolutions this shouldn't be a problem but at maximum size, it's quite noticeable and for the lack of better word, ugly. Another odd looking point is the lineart on her hands. The inner parts are coloured while the outline is black creating an inconsistent oddity. When dealing with the same part, stick with either coloured or black lineart, not a mix of both. Her right sleeve also possesses some odd coloured lineart overlapping. The black line should overlap the red line. Also have a look over your vector again at maximum resolution, there are a lot of overlapping lines where there shouldn't be.

Now about the colouring. The use of gradients on her clothes is definitely welcome addition and executed nicely [except that colour leak on her right leg at the bottom]. However, I cannot say the same about her hair. This really boils down to your lines again as they aren't smooth giving your filled colours an unnatural feel. Colour leaks also seem to be prevalent in your vector, take the time to review your vector before submission, a lot of trivial mistakes [that affect the vector's quality as a whole] can be prevented.

And... that wraps up what I have to say. Please don't take this wrongly, I'm just pointing out your areas of mistake in order for you to improve in the future. Good luck in the future!... bai.

wow i like this!!!

Haaaaarrrruuuuuuuu~ ;_;

Really nice work, good job wih the colouring especially. Not much i can say really, that hasn't already been said.

Nice to see some Haru love :D Have you played the game?

Woah so cute! I like you work!

I have never heard of this series.

Must find out more about this girl with the giant ahoge.

Overall, it looks pretty sharp! I'm a complete novice when it comes to vectoring, but it looks like you've got a good eye for things and did a great job with it. Perhaps we can see a wallpaper with her?

I'm not super happy about the character design, but the technical skill in this vector is great. The shading on her track suit, and on he hair, are done very well. Good job!

I really love how you did the fabric :D

Awesome work on the gradients, lineart not so much

Wow.... this is really a nice work you have done here !

Keep continuing like this

It's very nice! My suggestion would be you make add some weight to the lines because they're very "sterile". Also the shading isn't entirely accurate when compared ot the original.