Clannad School Girl

It looks good overall, and Kotomi is awesome, but what's with those windows? Like you forgot where some lines are supposed to end. The bench looks... rather unsuitable for sitting I suppose. And I dont know what to make of the lamp post's shadow. D: If you categorize this as some style, then its fine, but to me it looks a bit awkward.

The lamp... looks like clip art. The shadow shouldn't be the same color as the lamp either. The shape of the building is messed up. The windows are really sloppy. The bench doesn't look like a bench. Most benches outdoors have metal bars with long pieces of wood connecting them, with gaps in between. Kotomi looks out of place. Considering her placement compared to the size of everything she's probably standing in the middle of the road. Also, the lighting on her looks slightly red/ yellow making it seem like she's wandering around during a sunset, but your background doesn't reflect that. The background has too much white as well. It looks almost like it's from a scene from the game Mirrors Edge.

beautiful wallpaper.Nice work

As usual your vectoring skills never fails to amazes me, Not a huge fan of ecchi but definitely big fan of your work. Thanks for sharing this.

So nice! Good work!