School Days A Moment of Silence

Nice wall, I like the concept, from the preview it kinda looked like rain but its a cool wallpaper pattern! I like the bed sheet but it seems a bit blurry, otherwise nice concept!

Oh ho, you finished this up!

So let's start with a few things first. Big thing I like is the change in typography and the background itself. The addition of more vines as well as some texture really helps give it that extra pop to it. The addition vines really look cool and I like how the type flows on the vines, and more importantly how you limited the use of the typography on it as well. The flowers were a nice touch added to the vines themselves and they've got a nice texture to them to help add that extra oomph factor to the piece. It's definitely a good looking background, and as bantam stated it does sort of look like rain itself from the thumbnail. Really nice work with the background.

For the vector itself, I really like what you've done with it. It's a cute piece and you provided a warm and intimate setting for her as well in terms of the environment. In terms of the vectoring work, it looks like you did a rather nice job with it as well. You've definitely become more comfortable with vectoring, which is great to see and you're also challenging yourself with parts that give you a headache at times. However, I've noticed that with the sheet and then with the background, Setsuna tends to stand out a bit more. Mainly with all the textures you've got going on, and that clean vector, it strikes a bit of an off balance. It wasn't something I noticed terribly so before, but after really observing this final piece, it really strikes me. I do, however, really like the shading that you've done with it.

As for the rest, the sheet itself, it looks pretty awesome! there's a whole lot of texture to it and in the thumbnail, it looks fantastic. However, upon closer inspection it has a similar problem that the original concept that you showed me did, and that's blurriness. While I wouldn't even bother recommending this, because how much texture there is in it and the different lighting too, it definitely needs something to help clear it up a bit so the background, Setsuna and the sheet can fully cooperate without making a bunch of noise.

Ultimately, I really like how you keep challenging yourself with increasingly difficult pieces. You're definitely taking leaps forward and progression is definitely being made. You keep this up and you'll be in Top Wallpaper section in no time!

Those colors make the wall is very pleasant to the eye. This is a very good choice of matching the background and the character. Inserting that bedsheet was an original idea and it fits pretty good, mabye just a little too blurry. About the vector, i thought you vectored the hand wrong but it's the original artist's fault. You get better and better Glass, keep it up ^^

Oooh... very nice wallie, I really like it. Have a badge from me, this is going straight onto my desktop!

Simple and nice Setsuna, I see you like School Days and that's nice, keep up the good work!... ^_^

Picture is beautiful and pretty well made. I see where that title come from :D. And it can see from that tree behind that lovely girl.

So Cy really covered everything about your wall already but I'd like to provide my opinion too. First off your vector. It seems you have improved a great deal since your first and I commend you on that. The lineart has definitely gone through much improvement and looks great. But I do agree with that her fingers do seem a bit odd, they're end off too sharp making it seem unnatural (her forefinger also seems too 'fat').

I really like what you've done with your background. The typography, vines and texture come together very nicely; gives off a serene and fitting atmosphere. Now the sheet... at thumbnail looks nice. However upon fullview, the illusion is lost as it looks too blurry that it almost looks like snow. The contrast between the blur of the sheet and the sharpness of Setsuna is too great and noticeable. Don't get me wrong as I think the sheets look great, just increase the sharpness / decrease the blur and it'd look much better.

Your wallpapers are really improving quality and technique wise. Keep it up and you'll be on top in no time!

Cool wallpaper

nice wallpaper Setsuna is one of my favorite characters the palette of colors are good they combine nice my only critique it will be text on it but that's something barely visible so for me it's a great wallpaper. Congratulations

nice i like loli

that's pretty cute! my kind of girl

The background and the character itself is an amazing job what you did. However, bedsheets look a bit off the whole theme umm idk a bit too negetive ahh.. and the hair shine with deeper eyes would be welcome. But that's just my preference, you did a good job at this ^^

Very nice .well done

Good pic. I wish i colud do what you do.