A wallpaper by ~Pedrina91
Submitted 7 months, 3 days ago

Sword Art Online SAO - Is it real?

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SAO - Is it real? Sword Art Online Wallpaper

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 4 days ago

 

I'm watching SAO and I fell in love with it! So I made this wallpaper with one of my favourite characther of the anime, Asuna Yuuki!

I've used the AMAZING PSD WALL BY @Franshui (On DeviantArt)

Hope you like it **

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°Meronheddo

7 months, 3 days ago

 

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Ohhhhhh I think this is your best wallpaper so far!! :D A really good colour palette and you've got a nice pair of typefaces :D I really like the soft painted feel of the background, though the type at the top right hand side seems a bit unnecessary I think if you wanted to keep it you could have made it a part of the typography at the bottom. One other thing, she really doesn't need to have an outer glow around her :/ To be honest its a bit of a pet hate of mines, it just seems necessary, it almost makes her feel like shes not meant to be a part of the bg, though it is a rather subtle outer glow.

Anyway~ I like it, I fav it :D

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 2 days ago

 

Aww thanks a lot! your advices will improve my art!! ** I agree with many things.. next time iI'll try to not disappont you! thanks <3

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~Holonate

7 months, 3 days ago

 

Wow nice <3 how you used characters natural motion and put it in a nice wall. All of this fits correctly in my opinion <3 this wall, definitely my Favourite. Good job and keep em coming :P .

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 2 days ago

 

i'm so happy!! ** i'll keep doing wallpapers for you <3 thanks a lot!

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~jaem

7 months, 2 days ago

 

I really love asuna, this wall is amazing, you make a great job xD

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 1 day ago

 

I love her too, thanks a lot! **

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$asapanalavapa001

7 months, 2 days ago

 

Pefect!! You did an awesome job! The only thing I wished for is that there were higher resolutions... =( Keep up the good work!

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 1 day ago

 

I'm so sorry.. I'm try to solve this problem, but the picture itsself was 1440x810 :( what's your resolution?

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~shoked

7 months, 2 days ago

 

Cute wallpaper! good job! thanks! ^_^

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 1 day ago

 

Aw thanks to you! ^^

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~mik24

7 months, 2 days ago

 

wow - its beautiful and asuna is one of my favorite character

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 1 day ago

 

thanks a lot! **

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`CrimsonCyanide Unlimited Disguise Works

7 months, 2 days ago

 

Ok, I'm going to offer some feedback and first and foremost thing is I don't want you to take any offense to this. I want to offer what little knowledge I have in order to watch you grow.

First off, I'm sort of confused with the concept overall. You've got a picture of Asuna eating a burger of some sorts in a green background, accompanied by the text of "Sword Art Online - Is it real?". I'm a bit confused as to what we are questioning. Are we suppose to be wondering about how food tastes inside a VRMMORPG, or is the girl known as Asuna actually a real person? Or are we questioning the game itself and how the virtual reality of it all is real? Personally speaking, I like seeing concept blend together with the text and that sort of results in my biggest problem with this piece. Give us more to work off of with what isn't real. With a base knowledge of SAO, I can sort of take an random stab about what you mean by it being real, but for someone unfamiliar with the series it'll be hard to tie it together.

You've got lyrics to the right of Asuna's head, but with the offered resolution they are next to impossible to read, and don't fit with the tone of the wallpaper and stand out in a negative way. It's also hard to see how they tie together with the wallpaper itself that is generally aimed at a more scenic direction. I really enjoy the Sword Art Online - Is It Real? Text, but I'd remove the dash instead and place the "Is It Real" part some place else. Yuuki Asuna done with a fun typeface, but I don't really get the flowers right next to the name. Or the ring that's sort of going around them either.

I do really like your use of filtering in this piece. I think it works well in aiding it to come across as a fantasy piece and gives it that magical feel. What's more, is it also helps to give a more old school feel to the wallpaper itself. The only problems I have is the top right side becomes a bit too bright and the over-use of effects near the main text of the piece.

Also, I'd highly recommend offering more monitor friendly wallpapers. With monitor sizes coming is so many larger forms these days, it's rather difficult to make use of a wallpaper this small, sadly.

I don't want you take this the wrong way, I don't think this is bad. Not even remotely. I just think it needs a bit more refinement and re-direction to really help shape it into an incredible piece. Keep working hard, Pendrina!

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 1 day ago

 

Please call me Elisa <3 Aw thanks a lot! I really want to grow up so I'm happy to receive this kind of comments! First of all, the text "SAO - Is it real?" doesn't have just one meaning, you can see what you wanna see :P just use your imagination! For example I see that that burger could not be real (remember that scene of one episode?) or maybe it could be related to her.. :) I'm really trying to solve the problem of the resolution but the picture itself was 1440x810, and if I had enlarged it, it would be blurred :S Anyway thans a lot, I don't take this the wrong way don't worry <3 Thanks A LOT! and sorry for my bad english, i'm italian and i'm trying to do my best to improve it :p

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`CrimsonCyanide Unlimited Disguise Works

6 months, 4 weeks ago

 

By all means, Elisa.

Well, I'm just glad that you're happy to get those type of comments! I see what you mean about that text now, but I was just curious as to what your thoughts were for putting it in there. I thank you for letting me know!

As for the wallpaper size itself, I had a hunch that a lot hinged on the size of the image itself. That is one of the more difficult parts about using a smaller image without vectoring it, but I think you did rather well to compensate for the issue.

Once again, I'm really glad that you didn't take it the wrong way. Your politeness and good manners are a breath of fresh air and greatly welcomed. You keep being yourself, and you do quite well with English, so it's nothing you need to apologize for. Do take good care of yourself and I look forward to your next piece!

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~honesty

7 months, 2 days ago

 

thank you share this paper,wish you more and more handsome

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~Pedrina91

7 months, 1 day ago

 

aw no, thanks to you! ^^

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~bains6

7 months, 1 day ago

 

Really very cute Asuna eating a Burger. NICE!!!!!!!!

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~hyrz1103804275

7 months, 1 day ago

 

kawayi

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~Heika-chan

7 months, 18 hours ago

 

OMG so cute! I love it! Straight to desktop! And also in my resolution! I really like this 'made-by-hand' look :)

Just like Meronheddo said this type at the top right side doesn't seem to be necessary, rest is Great for me :)

Good work and keep it up!

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~holyPaladin

7 months, 11 hours ago

 

Very cute wallpaper of Asuna. I love this chibi Asuna :) Good job

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~honesty

7 months, 9 hours ago

 

very nice,it is wonderful,thank you very much

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~mikefma

6 months, 4 weeks ago

 

I've seem many comments and posts from this series lately...a friend of mine recommended to watch it...this wall makes me feel like watching it...thanks for sharing ;)

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~alayrachan

6 months, 4 weeks ago

 

que hermoso papel tapiz, me encanta... gracias por hacerlo.

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~HighAllegiant

6 months, 4 weeks ago

 

Absolutely adore the soft colours used here.

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~jaredknight

6 months, 3 weeks ago

 

this is great! nice job

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~Zachior

6 months, 3 weeks ago

 

I don't think they ever actually questioned if it was real or not.... remove? lol

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~ikitot

6 months, 3 weeks ago

 

it's very cute..

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~Ranma-Chan

6 months, 3 weeks ago

 

Asuna!! she's so cute. ^.^ nice wall

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~12rithy

6 months, 1 week ago

 

I love her too :)

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~Renton

6 months, 1 day ago

 

Nice work, thx !

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~davidexter

5 months, 3 weeks ago

 

kawaaaaii

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$dyingwill

5 months, 3 weeks ago

 

CUTE. I love this show haha

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~akumu

5 months, 3 weeks ago

 

It`s wonderful, I love this wall, thanks!! and great job! ^-^!

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~AsunaYuuki95

5 months, 2 weeks ago

 

i love it <3

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~nuugut

4 months, 2 weeks ago

 

oh what a sweetie wallpaper Asuna is so cute

Thanks for nice wallaper

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~ahmedkun007

3 months, 3 weeks ago

 

coooool... i love it <3 the colours and the character perfect work

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