Hi, well it's my eighth wallpaper. The scan that I use is this Steins;Gate picture.
For the accomplishment I had to choose the background that was managing to be adapted of good form by the central image, and give him certainly retouches for you could be fused finally as an alone image. Add some sparkle and shadows, for attachment to the characters in the background.
It ends up by playing with a typographical composition, in white and with certain shades to give him a bonus to the wallpaper.
I hope that they like, and wait for his comments or you criticize in the matter. :)
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6 months, 2 weeks ago
One thing I always enjoy is your experimentation with typography, and for the majority you make some really creative pieces. This is one of those pieces that the text ends up being a huge disadvantage to the wallpaper than a benefit.
First off, I really like the fact that you used a beach background. I'm curious if you created it yourself, or if it's a pre-existing image you already used, but I really like the choice of the beach scene for the scan. I also find it rather interesting that you put the fried squid(?) behind the text as well.
Now, here comes the critique, so I apologize in advance if I sound rude. Big thing, is with how you used the scan. I'm not sure if the lighting effects were adjust or what happened, but essentially it looks like the ladies have sun flares on their breasts. Each bosom is a source of bright light. I'm not sure if this was intentional, but it results in a distraction and not in a good way. Another thing is the text itself. I'm a bit confused as to the point and theme of the text, since it covers virtually the entire wallpaper itself. I'm not too sure what the theme is with the text used and how it fits up with the wallpaper itself aside from being the name of the show, and the characters in the wallpaper Another big thing is the color of the text. With the white on an already bright background, the end result is this background is rather bright and ends up being distracting from the background itself. I like the concept, but it seems a bit jarring in terms of complete composition.
Once again, I really like how experimental your wallpapers are. You aren't afraid to take risks and it makes each piece you create rather unique and enjoyable. I think that this piece itself is a unique idea that just needs some refinement in the typography category to give it that extra oomph.
6 months, 2 weeks ago
I like the general idea, but the scans are too bright and having a background mostly white doesn't help, maybe with a darker background the scans would feel nice, but again who makes a dark background for a beach themed wallpaper? I hope you come hope with an idea to fix this.
6 months, 2 weeks ago
I really like the idea behind this wallpaper. I can see that it has great potential. It's just that, like some have said, it's a bit too bright. Perhaps if the background wasn't so saturated so that when combined with the words it doesn't overwhelm the eyes. I'm not sure how I feel about the typography. I like it but I kind of don't like how it's majority of the wallpaper. I'ts also kind of hard to make out Kurisu's face but that may just be me. Heck, my screen might just be too bright at the moment. Overall though, I really love the idea of this wallpaper but I think the beach background may just be over-saturated, I think you can make the typography work.
6 months, 1 week ago
Mmm, yes, that squid looks delicious... so do the Steins;Gate girls. Nice job with this wall.
5 months, 4 weeks ago
Wow! I LOVE this!! And the font's AWESOME!
4 months, 3 weeks ago
Nicely done. Keep up the good work.