Watanabe Akio Devil Girl

I like the skirt and clothing they look really well done. The hair lacks a bit of definition, the shining effect is a bit too much blurred maybe? The colored outlines look good but a bit strange in some parts where there is a darker or lighter color next to it. Overall good work though.

nice i like the cloths and the coulers

I'm glad to see that you've used the colored outlines here, your vector becomes more web-friendly and clean in that way. But, I do agree with acid that there were some parts of the outline that was a little bit off and striking in the eyes. What I usually do when I encounter that is I tweak the color of the lineart or the shapes that surround the lineart that has the problem until I find the right one. About the hair maybe it needs some gradient overlay to add some shine on it because I usually prefer shiny hair on girls and bishies. I would also like to point out the spear that she is holding especially the blade, I think it needs to have a metallic and sharp effect. But, I really like the her skirt and stockings, you have applied nice gradients on them. Overall, great improvement in your skill and hope you continue on doing that. Added this to my favorites.

Close-up, the lines look a tad wonky in places, but the overall image looks very good. Nice job.

I really like as you use the gradients between soft and solid, mmm his gaze in my opinion lacks that which makes you deepen in seeing only that stress because I look much in the looks and the depth of the eyes and on the type of design that you think about I like keep it up... good job friend (y)

It looks great!

Awesome vector Madara! It's nice and clean. The quality is really good, as are the colours.

Plus she's cute ;)

Awesome!

amazing

Sexy

Secy as Hell! Nice background too

good vector and background .... great work ^^ .... Salu2

Indeed, this is kawaii ; I like it.

I love her eyes and the skirt is quite cute and nice looking. The ends of her hair look weird to me though and the blade of her spear does look a bit dull a needs more of a metallic look to it. I love the purple ^^