Random vector I did with an obli
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~de-mote
2 months, 4 weeks ago
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Inaba Himeko
2 months, 3 weeks ago by ~de-mote
Hachikuji Mayoi
2 months, 4 weeks ago by ~de-mote
Inaba Himeko
2 months, 3 weeks ago by ~de-mote
Kokoro Connect
8 months, 5 days ago by ~chowfun
I Wonder Who I will be Today
7 months, 2 weeks ago by ~dwanex
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2 months, 2 weeks ago
nice, i do like it, clearlook. can i download it please
2 months, 2 weeks ago
I liked Inaban, the bg is good, smoothly and brightly, kinda love it ^ ^
2 months, 2 weeks ago
one question. Why is she on a path that's... well quite long in her school uniform? Also. Background doesn't look like it was made yourself. Lacks depth perception. The fog makes it look like a cold day, yet she clearly isn't dressed for it. Now that I think about it. The background doesn't look right at all. It looks sunny, but there's fog. Then it should be either a hotspring area or up high, yet the ocean/lake disagrees with that. The rest of the space is just begging to be used, as it looks like.. well just a background with a vector overtop, a little here and there but nothing else in the foreground
She doesn't blend with the background well. She looks out of place, as.. well the environment has fog, but there are no traces of anything on her, as if for her it was just another sunny day walking to school. It's not hard to tell that she's out of place cause the art style of Kokoro Connect and whoever made the background don't mix very well. I haven't watched Kokoro Connect but I would assume that there's a lot less blue in day scenes except for a couple Christmas episodes too.
TBH I've been looking at a lot of your wallpapers cause you throw out so many, but so many of them are mediocre just because it seems as though you don't take the time to revise. Of course, my assumptions might be wrong, but I'm just saying what I'm seeing
2 months, 1 week ago
Yeaa, I realize now that I need to choose my background choice more wisely. I can see where you're coming from and I agree on most it. I never plan on using some stock background again.
As for the revision thing, I don't have the time to make all the revisions I want to. Being in school 'n all, that kinda takes priority. All the wallpapers submitted so far were from when I had time back earlier in the semester or during winter/summer break. But I do take into consideration all the criticism that I get from everyone for next time I make a wallpaper. This place is so much better on criticism than any other site I've been on, it's amazing.
2 months, 1 week ago
Most people take weeks, if not months to prepare their walls. Heck, there are even cases of walls being being forgotten about for years before they're released. There are no deadlines at AP, at least for normal entries. I really hope you get better at backgrounds, cause your vectors aren't half-bad. I've been watching all of your releases so far, and people pretty much point to the same thing: your backgrounds aren't doing the vectors justice (and that's the really nice version of what people are saying). You've been giving the same manufactured response every time, but so far no real improvements. I hope you take your time with your next wallpaper. Godspeed.
2 months, 2 weeks ago
Nice background. Vector is good and I like the character design. Great job.
2 months, 2 weeks ago
The first major problem I have was the VERY SHORT DESCRIPTION that it could be marked as spam(luckily it was the author's comments) because of its length. I can't blame @Hoser1358 about her thoughts. But please let do hear my insights about this one. With your SHORT description I could tell that the girl was your vector(your SHORT description was a little bit helpful though). The vector was nice and clean but not that epic. The background was some stock photo that you found(I don't know where). So maybe your process goes this way, you slap your vector to the background, then add your signature and then submit. I could say that because I couldn't even see some effort about the blending of those two elements. Please do correct me(or us) if I(or we) were wrong, we could not even make a good evaluation of something if it lacks necessary information needed to make a judgement.
2 months, 1 week ago
I just really don't know what to put for half of these descriptions. When submitting these, I submitted them all in one day and the mods have just been posting them slowly but surely. Most of them were wallpapers that I made a few months back. But I always have this feeling of "Crap, I've gotta put more than this in here" but I never end up doing it. Though I have no idea what this description is... >_> When I have time to make more recent wallpapers I'll have more to say.
And yes it that is a background I found, this was the only instance where I didn't make a background. Most of my backgrounds are by me or are edited screenshots from the actual anime. This one was just different.
2 months, 2 weeks ago
Needs more Dereban
2 months, 2 weeks ago
It looks clean but it just doesn't seem to click. You should have given the choice of background some more thought.
2 months, 1 week ago
I don't quite catch the looking cute out of place. Inaba looks cute but anyway try a different background.
2 months, 1 week ago
Wait, that background, you found it off of Konachan/Zerochan didn't you? I see it under the "scenic" tag... Anyhow the bloom effect is a bit on the average/low side, But the character seems to fit quite nicely with the background. It's fine as a normal pic, but imo needs work to be a download-worthy wallpaper (considering this site's tendency to limit your download limit to every 3-4 days)
2 months, 5 days ago
nice, mmm
1 month, 3 weeks ago
Simple yet nicely done. I like how there are a variety of colors and the background complements the character very well