Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru! Gonna Miss Me

Ooooh yeah. Red and black and vectors, all my weaknesses. Never heard that song before but I can kinda hear it in my head just from reading. At first glance I thought that a warmer background color would have been better, but upon closer inspection, it fits rather well with her shorts. The font you chose is not too flashy, but it still works well. The girl has a lot of "shiny bits", maybe you could have played with adding some shinies on the black parts? No idea what more could be said about this wallie, I'll leave it up to the more imaginative members here. So yeah, final verdict: wall is mccool keep it up mecha!

Great bold colors for back. I like the teal type hue offsetting with the red. Looks really bold with the nice typography! Great work!

A damn good wallpaper :O It just all fits! no matter where I look, my eyes follow something fun. I agree with acid, the vector is very good (I wonder exactly which part has he been starring for days eh? xD), and u made a good use of it. I have a suggestion if you are open to those: you might want to put a stronger shade behind her (like in the vector but black), just to give the wall more depth. Great wall, +Fav :)

I love the color scheme!! Really cute vector also. The texture and the text make the wall looks amazing, good job! You deserve my +fav!

I liked bg ,OMG ,Extremely Cute!!

The color and detail of the background fit well with the color and detail of the vector. Nicely composed, good detail, good job.

Wow, I really love this one mecha! This is beautiful! ^^ I really love the concept!

I prefer revision 1 as in my opinion, the glow on the upper right of revision 2 can be a lil distracting. xd Anyway, good use of shapes and colour. The design is very bold but it works, due to the good arrangement of font and shapes. I love the colour combination as it is striking and good use of texture here, especially the one layered behind the font.

However, the texture used for the bg can be toned down a little to make the bg cleaner. It is enough to emphasize the texture in the pink colour section (the one with the font) Besides, you can place the character in front of the thick black line, rather than covering the legs with the black part which comes with the typography section. Plus, you can try to make use of layering and brushes to make sure the colour of the bg and character blend in better. They are of different style and more effort of blending the colours are needed to make it superb. XD I don't think you need to add sparkle as it is good enough. As long as you managed to bring out the typography, it should be fine.

You are good when it comes to making a typography bg. I believe that you are able to learn more and make a better one in the future, mecha dear. Keep it up! Looking forward to see your next work. XD

really nice wall love it^^

hmm..what else can I say? there's already a lot of good comments on this one....uhm..all I can say is....another wonderful job from you mecha!

Excellent use of color!

Ok, revision 2 was a lot better than revision 1.The version 1 has a poor blending of the elements but I was glad that version 2 was release not too soon. For version 2, the blending of the character on the background was done nicely and at the same time adding more color contrast on the overall piece. The only thing that bothers was the solar flare that you've added. WHY DID YOU ADD A SOLAR FLARE? That was the question that was really playing on my mind(I just can't fathom that kind of concept or idea). To tell you frankly, it made the nicely done version 2 to collapse as a whole. I think SOLAR FLARES are usually used on scenic pieces and was never used on an abstract wall like this one. Regarding the about the typo that you've got here they are a bit simple and bland but the nice choice of texture was able to compensate for that disability. The overall lively color palette was really nice to stare at, not too bright nor too dark. Overall, I just love the simplicity matched with nice composition and colors but it have some things that needed some attention to have a better overall impact. Hoping you would be able to publish another version of this wall. And good luck.

Tolles Bild :D

Whoooo... I've been busy these past few days so I hadn't had the time to comment on this. Anyway! This wallpaper came quite soon after your last one (which is always welcome!). So as usual you applied your ever-so-present "mecha-style" to this wall too, but this time with more typography! Strictly speaking about the background design, I think it looks wonderful. Your style of combing textures, brushes and typography never seems to tire me and this one is no exception. Even though it's still within your comfort zone, I feel you are gradually improving upon your style with each and every new wall. My only gripe would be that the textures on the blue parts are too visible and distracting. I'd like to see them toned down a notch.

Now there's something new you've done this time around. Instead of using an extraction as your focus, you've used a vector (and my favourite vector at that =D). However! I hate to say but it seems you've been very accustomed to using extractions so the switch to a vector hasn't been as smooth as it could've been. The biggest problem with what you have right now is the difference in sharpness between the vector and the background. As expected of a vector, it is very sharp and clean; however your background hasn't kept up creating this noticeable contrast. What I assume is happening is that extractions aren't as sharp making for a better fit for your types of backgrounds. You haven't updated your background style accordingly to allow it to flow better with the vector.

Well enough of my complaints. Of the two revisions, I would've liked something in-between with the flare absent and the outline of the vector present (oh well~). Regardless, your overall result is still the same ol' mecha-style and how can I ever hate it? =P

Adding a light source to the top right was a good (and maybe bad) idea. It sort of explained why Miyabi was shiny but is a bit distracting. Though the positioning of the source was good. Positioning it next to the incline that will direct the viewer to Miyabi. The choice of the red and blue background fits with the clothes. And the black has good contrast with the light. Nice work. Miyabi looks cute :3

Nice mix of art and colors,and lovely sexy girl,so cute.

Thank you very much

nice!

For me, the black wall of text feels overwhelming, especially since the image itself uses bright, warm colors. This feeling of overwhelming may be coming from the fact that the leading feels too tight; loosening up that spacing might give it more breathing space. I'm also not quite convinced by the blue you chose for the background. It feels a tad too dark, because it's making the wall feel darker than it should be. Am interested in how the wall would look with the blue that's closer to the color of the shorts she's wearing.

The vector of the girl is really cool, and fits nicely with the colours you have chosen. Don't much like the blue outline around her but maybe that's just me ~.~ Great work nontheless

What a colorful wallpaper. The background is awesome!