A wallpaper by ~Hoser1358
Submitted 2 months, 2 weeks ago

Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai Kuroneko Sunset

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Kuroneko Sunset Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai Wallpaper

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~Hoser1358

2 months, 2 weeks ago

 

Sooo I haven't posted in awhile eh?Speedart/Timelapse thing..

It's quite old.. From last year but was hesitant on posting this because some of it is pretty crudely done. ie, the grass was using the stock Photoshop brush, but revectored at a larger size

The mountains were made blue because in my mind I see mountains as blue and white.

Not much to say. Don't expect revisions on this. Do not distribute please, as it's a pain to deal with people who steal work. Probably the last wallpaper I'll post here as I'm managing my own website for distribution of my wallpapers, namely for "organizations" of sorts

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°mechanenko

2 months, 2 weeks ago

 

Not some. In overall everything is crudely done. I like the lighting though. It pretty accurately follows the light source. But still it should touch on the grass.

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~Hoser1358

2 months, 2 weeks ago

 

Well then, rather just simply saying that critic it... seriously. If one is gonna try saying that something is done badly or similar, one should be prepared to point out things that can be improved. The lighting does effect the grass, just not as much, and now that i look at it, the tips should be a bit lighter.

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°mechanenko

2 months, 2 weeks ago

 

I was sure that you were aware of it as was implied on your description. To point out flaws when it's already quite obvious is vexing to me. Most people do not treat criticism as just. Initially I wanted to point out the lack of a good concept, composition etc but as I said it's vexing and left it at that and decided to point out the only pretty decent thing. You can attempt to use stock as grass, change the mountains and etc to better this. Have you not see the lack of understanding of distance of the mountains and plains? You should had used a reference to get an accurate depiction of this landscape that you are trying to portray. The best advice I would give you is to scrape the whole thing and forget about it and move on to do another/new project. Accept this one as a failure and learn from it. You may attempt to do another one with a similar concept in the near future, at least by then you will know what not to do. Good luck to you good sir!

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~layfon009

2 months, 1 week ago

 

wow its coll

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~AznRiceBoi

1 month, 3 weeks ago

 

I like the idea you used for the wall and the shadows are very nicely done. I would have preferred to have a bit more detail to the mountains but the simplicity is also good.

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~tekkenjin

1 month, 3 weeks ago

 

i'm gonna grab her while she's saying onii chan. u ecchi

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~oneoutsider

2 weeks, 6 days ago

 

krroneko always cute......but the background just so simple.

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